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[sid] => 184707
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Juxtaposition
[time] => 2017-12-11 04:11:38
[hometext] => Duality exists within conciousness in a constant state of flux. Stability is attained only by choice and determination.
[bodytext] => Crumpled and torn in a heap on the floor
Begging for simple sweet touch ...yet ignored,
So simple a task... a twist of the tongue,
So simple a thought... this bottomless rung,
To breathe is to share all the pressure and pain,
Release me you fool, this slave to the grain,
Follow me through this harrowing sanity,
Fight for this life ... this fight for humanity,
Such solace and pleasure we find while we wait,
A broken device never felt so irate,
A critic to mold... your harshest reality,
To guide us within... our darkest causality.
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[informant] => Deusdeira
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[topicname] => DarkPoetry
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Juxtaposition
Contributed by
Deusdeira
on
Monday, 11th December 2017 @ 04:11:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Crumpled and torn in a heap on the floor
Begging for simple sweet touch ...yet ignored,
So simple a task... a twist of the tongue,
So simple a thought... this bottomless rung,
To breathe is to share all the pressure and pain,
Release me you fool, this slave to the grain,
Follow me through this harrowing sanity,
Fight for this life ... this fight for humanity,
Such solace and pleasure we find while we wait,
A broken device never felt so irate,
A critic to mold... your harshest reality,
To guide us within... our darkest causality.
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Deusdeira
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2017-12-11 04:11:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Juxtaposition
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 11th December 2017 @ 12:54:04 PM AEST (User
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Stability is a hard thing to have and control
excellent flow..... |
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Re: Juxtaposition
(User Rating: 1 ) by xHeathenx on
Monday, 11th December 2017 @ 01:23:40 PM AEST (User
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The tale of enlightenment huh?
At least that/'/s what it/'/s looking like to me. I liked this. It reminds me a lot of what Jordan Peterson talks about when he regards the importance of developing purpose or meaning for your self and your life and giving layers of purpose that cover a spectrum or hierarchy of what/'/s good for you now, you 5 five years from now, 10 years from now, and the best that you can offer for mankind as a whole. It/'/s pretty fascinating stuff.
The weirdest thing of all is that I look deep down inside myself and bring my self stability, but can only handle so much. Finding stability is a necessary task I have to undertake, and until I do, everything I look at in myself will be nothing but scary and confusing.
Good luck to you in yours brotha.
good to see you on for the first time in a while too :)
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Re: Juxtaposition
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Saturday, 30th December 2017 @ 09:58:02 PM AEST (User
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depth...think on, thinker!
I like this quite a lot.
invierno |
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