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The dark sky descended with a purple hue over the city
It was only 10am but looked like it was evening
Misty clouds occasionally cover the object in the sky
A perfect sphere of orange never seen before on our shores

Have I awoken in a new world?
Am I on a new planet?
A mirror to my home planet earth
They say there was fire over Spain and Portugal
The smoke and ash clouds drifted to my city and made the sun blood orange

Storm Ophelia is coming later
For this apocalyptic sun is the warning beacon
Later things returned to there natural state
But tonight the storm will be upon us
Things began to rattle under mighty gusts later that day
We are ready

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Apocalyptic Sun

Contributed by banjosandwitch on Monday, 16th October 2017 @ 03:49:01 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Apocalyptic Sun

The dark sky descended with a purple hue over the city
It was only 10am but looked like it was evening
Misty clouds occasionally cover the object in the sky
A perfect sphere of orange never seen before on our shores

Have I awoken in a new world?
Am I on a new planet?
A mirror to my home planet earth
They say there was fire over Spain and Portugal
The smoke and ash clouds drifted to my city and made the sun blood orange

Storm Ophelia is coming later
For this apocalyptic sun is the warning beacon
Later things returned to there natural state
But tonight the storm will be upon us
Things began to rattle under mighty gusts later that day
We are ready

banjosandwitch 16/10/17

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Re: Apocalyptic Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 17th October 2017 @ 06:50:12 PM AEST
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I think many on earth today need a good shaking. I for one wouldn/'/t mind a earth refreshing. This poem provoked many good thoughts. Bravo!

Re: Apocalyptic Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Wednesday, 18th October 2017 @ 12:18:48 AM AEST
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I do not know if we are ready
spooky and scary
and
thought provoking....

Re: Apocalyptic Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 3rd November 2017 @ 06:29:16 AM AEST
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I remember waking up to a dark sky and orange sun and thinking exactly the same thing, the apocalypse has arrived and this is the end.
Then I thought........if it is, i/'/m so glad I had the day off work!!
Nature has many surprises for us, even now!!

Steve

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