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Array ( [sid] => 18438 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I will try LIFE instead [time] => 2003-06-02 16:05:00 [hometext] => This might be it for me not death, but life,
we will see Your friend untill the end.
Thank you all from Jasen France. [bodytext] => No more pain, its all gone
I feel sane, somethings wrong
For the first time in my life I feel Ok
And I hope this way I can stay
Things were so bad before
Suicide I couldnt ignore
The thoughts were always there
But now I have no fear
For once Im standing tall
and I dont feel that small
Nothing in my life has changed
My prioritys Ive arranged
Instead of feeling bad for me
I look for things better to see
I used to hate my life
Untill I lost my wife
Now I want to get things staight
Before it gets to late
You see she is my everything
Without her Im no being
So I have no choice to change my ways
I'll be looking for a job that pays
My poetry is no longer first
Untill I get reimbursed
I feel as though I am great
But I suppose that it can wait
Because shes more important than my words
And to lose it all is just absurd
So I am sorry YPDC
This could be the last youve heard from me
Goodbye and farewell and the best to you all
Sooner or later I will be back
As soon as I get myself on track
But up untill then
One last goodbye to my friends

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 43 [informant] => SuicidalSon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
I will try LIFE instead

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



No more pain, its all gone
I feel sane, somethings wrong
For the first time in my life I feel Ok
And I hope this way I can stay
Things were so bad before
Suicide I couldnt ignore
The thoughts were always there
But now I have no fear
For once Im standing tall
and I dont feel that small
Nothing in my life has changed
My prioritys Ive arranged
Instead of feeling bad for me
I look for things better to see
I used to hate my life
Untill I lost my wife
Now I want to get things staight
Before it gets to late
You see she is my everything
Without her Im no being
So I have no choice to change my ways
I'll be looking for a job that pays
My poetry is no longer first
Untill I get reimbursed
I feel as though I am great
But I suppose that it can wait
Because shes more important than my words
And to lose it all is just absurd
So I am sorry YPDC
This could be the last youve heard from me
Goodbye and farewell and the best to you all
Sooner or later I will be back
As soon as I get myself on track
But up untill then
One last goodbye to my friends





Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2003-06-02 16:05:00]
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Re: I will try LIFE instead (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 04:37:02 PM AEST
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Great write I understand that other things may come first. If you feel the urge to write please put what your feelings down on paper. In the meantime I will miss reading your poems.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: I will try LIFE instead (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 04:56:28 PM AEST
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You seem to be on the right track,by acknowledging you need to move on. I wish you all the best in your endeavors! Your words will be surely missed,and I only pray you return to your poetry and your friends here. Keep on writing as you venture into the unknown,we'll be glad to read the great results you return with!!!! 0:-)
Angel always!!! Godspeed!!! joni




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