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Array ( [sid] => 183852 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lonely we seek [time] => 2016-12-23 15:41:23 [hometext] => Beyond space [bodytext] => Fear death
Fear less
Fear nothing more than this mess
Let lonely we seek
To be controlled by the mass
Of this ocean we breathe
Into the sun
I run for your love
No, time breaks it
They make it
I stood still between time and space
Oh let lonely
I took a call
To the outside I crawl
I let known of whom
You are so far away
Yet beyond the surface I see
Good to know
I let lonely free me
Yet another day it bound me
Set him free
Me, I, oh and why
Took me to this junkies place
No, come together all at once
I let you see the darkness
Yet the light will burst into your eyes
Oh you foolish creatures
Bound by madness
Of this creation
Telling and showing
Could be just the same
Your closed minds
Come, come
I won’t kick you
I won’t hurt you
Cause you don’t see this clearly
Ha!
Your foolish hearts
Fooled to love
Let lonely we fly
Let lonely we walk
Forever on I might see you face
I will forget it
Time here is nothing but a gust in space [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 73 [informant] => Apollonia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Lonely we seek

Contributed by Apollonia on Friday, 23rd December 2016 @ 03:41:23 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Fear death
Fear less
Fear nothing more than this mess
Let lonely we seek
To be controlled by the mass
Of this ocean we breathe
Into the sun
I run for your love
No, time breaks it
They make it
I stood still between time and space
Oh let lonely
I took a call
To the outside I crawl
I let known of whom
You are so far away
Yet beyond the surface I see
Good to know
I let lonely free me
Yet another day it bound me
Set him free
Me, I, oh and why
Took me to this junkies place
No, come together all at once
I let you see the darkness
Yet the light will burst into your eyes
Oh you foolish creatures
Bound by madness
Of this creation
Telling and showing
Could be just the same
Your closed minds
Come, come
I won’t kick you
I won’t hurt you
Cause you don’t see this clearly
Ha!
Your foolish hearts
Fooled to love
Let lonely we fly
Let lonely we walk
Forever on I might see you face
I will forget it
Time here is nothing but a gust in space

Copyright Â© Apollonia ... [ 2016-12-23 15:41:23]
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Re: Lonely we seek (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd December 2016 @ 07:29:14 PM AEST
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this is very enchantingly
written and deep
it is true I believe
how the lonely do
weep in silence
in the square

deep means thoughtful
enchanting meaning
the mind focused yet
still in tune with the
heart

superb write!
Peace!

Re: Lonely we seek (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 31st December 2016 @ 11:08:23 AM AEST
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I love how you wrote this. Well done.

~Scorp

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