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Array ( [sid] => 183846 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Christmas Vacation [time] => 2016-12-22 11:14:14 [hometext] => Merry Christmas? [bodytext] => Can/'/t you see
We/'/re on the threshold of Hell
It is a K.O
Please ref; ring the bell
Ding! Ding! Ding!
I feel an unnatural urge
Lumpy and vomitus
A desperate need to purge
Bite my tongue
And teeth I grit
Ding dong! Ding dong!
Fml; this is it
Open the door
Cheek pinching and pokes
Obnoxious, loud,
Who are these strange folks?
Five conversations
All at once competing
My serenity
Hastily retreating
Close my eyes
And draw a deep breath
Silently pray
For merciful death
Open my eyes
And plaster a smile
No end in sight,
They/'/ll be here for awhile
Is it too late
To settle for coal?
Summon the devil
To collect my soul?
I/'/m sober,
This is not fair!
Without imbibing
No one would dare!
Be surrounded
By these blokes any longer
Without subscribing
To something much stronger!
Suddenly the answer
It beckons to me
Can/'/t save this Christmas,
But next year, I/'/m free!
A booming voice
Perhaps straight from God;
Take a vacation-
Figure it out, broad!

Wishing you all the best. Be safe out there, YPDCers!
😱🦂 [comments] => 8 [counter] => 671 [topic] => 18 [informant] => hauntedscorp [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Holiday Poetry )

Christmas Vacation

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 22nd December 2016 @ 11:14:14 AM in AEST
Topic: Holiday Poetry

Can/'/t you see
We/'/re on the threshold of Hell
It is a K.O
Please ref; ring the bell
Ding! Ding! Ding!
I feel an unnatural urge
Lumpy and vomitus
A desperate need to purge
Bite my tongue
And teeth I grit
Ding dong! Ding dong!
Fml; this is it
Open the door
Cheek pinching and pokes
Obnoxious, loud,
Who are these strange folks?
Five conversations
All at once competing
My serenity
Hastily retreating
Close my eyes
And draw a deep breath
Silently pray
For merciful death
Open my eyes
And plaster a smile
No end in sight,
They/'/ll be here for awhile
Is it too late
To settle for coal?
Summon the devil
To collect my soul?
I/'/m sober,
This is not fair!
Without imbibing
No one would dare!
Be surrounded
By these blokes any longer
Without subscribing
To something much stronger!
Suddenly the answer
It beckons to me
Can/'/t save this Christmas,
But next year, I/'/m free!
A booming voice
Perhaps straight from God;
Take a vacation-
Figure it out, broad!

Wishing you all the best. Be safe out there, YPDCers!
😱🦂

Copyright © hauntedscorp ... [ 2016-12-22 11:14:14]
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Re: Christmas Vacation (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd December 2016 @ 05:49:51 PM AEST
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Yeesh, this made me think of nightmares ❕😨😱

Cause that/'/s how it read...to me.

Scorpendous as always ❗💯✨👍

Re: Christmas Vacation (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd December 2016 @ 06:29:40 PM AEST
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Except for the last five lines. Positive thoughts. Vacations are cool. 👍

Re: Christmas Vacation (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Friday, 23rd December 2016 @ 11:54:06 AM AEST
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This is awesome. The chaotic eye rolling mood of the holidays is captured in splendid form. Your imagery takes you right there and a big smile is conjured! Great job

Re: Christmas Vacation (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 24th December 2016 @ 11:42:28 PM AEST
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I see this from a child/'/s point of view...all the relatives arriving and talking at once, pinching cheeks and poking and prying...while he tries to slap a smile on his face!
Christmas for some is an invasion of their sanctuary by unwelcome relatives en mass!
But spend a Christmas alone in a strange town, when everything is closed, and you would give a month/'/s pay for a relative to pinch your cheek!
Brings back a lot of memories! It is never too late to settle for coal! 4 carats would be sublime!
softerware

Re: Christmas Vacation (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Sunday, 25th December 2016 @ 08:41:34 AM AEST
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Duff stole my thoughts. I guess I stole his first.
Bravo!

James

Re: Christmas Vacation (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Saturday, 31st December 2016 @ 12:22:37 AM AEST
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Baileys in coffee. That/'/s the way to go. This was perfectly awful. :) As it was supposed to be. Great write.

ming

Re: Christmas Vacation (User Rating: 1 )
by Apollonia on Sunday, 1st January 2017 @ 12:43:21 PM AEST
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I love this - so many emotions and a little hope in the end.? Well written.

Apollonia

Re: Christmas Vacation (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 29th March 2022 @ 04:31:16 AM AEST
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This is an amazing write, one thing for sure you write great poetry. I like the sentiment, it reminds me of my childhood.

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