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Array ( [sid] => 183780 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => comma [time] => 2016-11-28 12:06:28 [hometext] => Innovation can only occur where you can breathe free.~Joe Biden [bodytext] => that place
you breathe
or think

or watch
unheard
words

slide to
the floor
and roll

to
empty
corners. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 399 [topic] => 73 [informant] => ming [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

comma

Contributed by ming on Monday, 28th November 2016 @ 12:06:28 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

that place
you breathe
or think

or watch
unheard
words

slide to
the floor
and roll

to
empty
corners.

Copyright © ming ... [ 2016-11-28 12:06:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: comma (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Monday, 28th November 2016 @ 12:37:54 PM AEST
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interesting piece, something i will have to read a few more times. Good work

Rich

Re: comma (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Monday, 28th November 2016 @ 01:27:46 PM AEST
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A compact piece that/'/s always accompanied by your touch. I think we all have a place we retreat to that allows us to be creative. Well done my friend.

duff

Re: comma (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 29th November 2016 @ 07:15:31 PM AEST
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I like this one a lot. Great expression! Love it.

~Scorp

Re: comma (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Thursday, 1st December 2016 @ 07:27:37 PM AEST
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Elegant in its simplicity. You write like Picasso painted. Just enough lines to form an image, and too few to define the content, leaving the observer to imagine the rest of the work of art.
A thousand will read this, and see a thousand different meanings, and that is the beauty of your skillful condensation.
It amuses me to think that your skills could rewrite WIKOPEDIA in 10 pages and leave nothing overlooked.
softerware

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