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Array ( [sid] => 182715 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => how/'/s your crown [time] => 2016-03-03 17:41:36 [hometext] => Whenever I climb I am followed by a dog called /'/Ego./'/~Friedrich Nietzche [bodytext] => my head
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can
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touch
this
line

together
and back
away
fast

the thorns
the blood
the shatter
on the floor

the raw
language
makes
uncomfortable

the chair
the tilt
arranges
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how's your crown

Contributed by ming on Thursday, 3rd March 2016 @ 05:41:36 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

my head
waits
on every
page

I
can
not
imagine

let/'/s
touch
this
line

together
and back
away
fast

the thorns
the blood
the shatter
on the floor

the raw
language
makes
uncomfortable

the chair
the tilt
arranges
and I

leave
them
to
it.

Copyright © ming ... [ 2016-03-03 17:41:36]
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Re: how's your crown (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 4th March 2016 @ 09:07:04 PM AEST
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This is brilliant. It/'/s abstract with colourful language to stir the minds eye, and that/'/s a helluva ending.

~Scorp

Re: how's your crown (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Saturday, 5th March 2016 @ 05:49:54 AM AEST
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Woah, I read this yesterday, and started getting it a bit, but reading it today, holy cow I visioned the same stuff differently!

I pictured the scene much more akin to the music video for "Take on Me" by the Ah-Ha/'/s, and then I can almost see big pieces of it, like a tiny moment in time that encompasses many hours, or in reality, seemingly-limitless amounts of time, but feels like it takes mere few seconds to take place. It/'/s so intense by way of reading it though, that if I saw it as a short film, by no means would it do it justice- even if it looked EXACTLY the way I pictured it. Lol how strange.

Thanks for sharing,
-Mark

Re: how's your crown (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Saturday, 5th March 2016 @ 05:51:27 AM AEST
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I also want to add, that I didn/'/t take the name of the poem into consideration the first time, which may have been a good source of the confusion. But I/'/m not sure.

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