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Array ( [sid] => 182411 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye [time] => 2016-01-09 19:17:44 [hometext] => January 5th 2015 [bodytext] => Cried myself to sleep tonight
With only one thought on my mind
"How could you do this to me,
how could you just leave?"

You ripped out my heart once again
Your not my angel, not my friend
Yet, you promised me forever
Too bad it was severed

As I lay here forlorn and bare
All I can do is blink and stare,
at all the thoughts running through my mind
all the time that has passed me by

This time its final as final can be
I/'/ll be truely, honestly free,
from all the horrible lies
I can finally say goodbye [comments] => 3 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 22 [informant] => FireStarter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Goodbye

Contributed by FireStarter on Saturday, 9th January 2016 @ 07:17:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Cried myself to sleep tonight
With only one thought on my mind
"How could you do this to me,
how could you just leave?"

You ripped out my heart once again
Your not my angel, not my friend
Yet, you promised me forever
Too bad it was severed

As I lay here forlorn and bare
All I can do is blink and stare,
at all the thoughts running through my mind
all the time that has passed me by

This time its final as final can be
I/'/ll be truely, honestly free,
from all the horrible lies
I can finally say goodbye

Copyright © FireStarter ... [ 2016-01-09 19:17:44]
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Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 9th January 2016 @ 10:11:03 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feeling,

hugs n/'/ love nessa

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th January 2016 @ 07:26:06 PM AEST
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We/'/ve all been there. A thought from a source I can not recall /'/THIS is love. The affection, breakfast together and intimacy, that builds love. But its the heartache, anger, missing them, solitude, all of the raw emotions afterwards, THAT is when you are really loving them./'/

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Wednesday, 13th January 2016 @ 11:04:58 AM AEST
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Oh, shame I feel. I was that boy. I had told my girlfriend years ago that I would always love her; that nobody could ever take that place. I said I would never leave, that I would always be there. How sad the three years after were, when I found myself, hollow, emptied and unaware of just how miserable I was; in denial of my real emotional state that I so forcibly refused to address. How guilt-stricken I was when her grandfather had passed away from cancer, and she wrote in her blog "the one person I need isn/'/t here" either a year or two after we had split. I saw her on occasion, but while she was with someone else, it hurt me to be near, and I had to leave. How guilty I/'/ve felt, and to extent still do, regretful to say, even nearly a decade later. Be thankful you/'/re not the one who made that promise. It/'/s easier to say "they lied" than it is to accept "I lied to the one I love."

I still enjoy this for what it/'/s worth. I wish you the best, and for the first time in a comment on this site, I/'/ll say I wish myself the best too. I don/'/t open up with things that personal generally speaking, and it/'/s not healthy. Know that I know your pain in this one, but from the other side, and it/'/s hell for somebody who meant it. But don/'/t ever let that take your mind away from how you feel. If you don/'/t look out for yourself first, you/'/ll never learn how to look out for the one you love more than "just enough".
-Mark

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