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what would a wombat see if he were to dream,
stalks, skies of blue, grasses and crunchy things?
yummy sticks? dreams about another wombat?
those cute little creatures 'bout the size of a cat,
what would go 'round and 'round in his head?
perhaps the poetry only a wombat had said;
to a lady wombat once upon a time in dreams,
truely it's all speculation it seems,
for alas~
who really knows what a wombat dreams?
what would be in his mind across time?
as night breezes blew over his fur sublime,
i think his dreams might be bestrewed
about romping with his feet filled of dew,
only some simple little wombat thoughts
that every other dreaming wombat sought.
°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*
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a wombats dream
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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what would a wombat see if he were to dream,
stalks, skies of blue, grasses and crunchy things?
yummy sticks? dreams about another wombat?
those cute little creatures 'bout the size of a cat,
what would go 'round and 'round in his head?
perhaps the poetry only a wombat had said;
to a lady wombat once upon a time in dreams,
truely it's all speculation it seems,
for alas~
who really knows what a wombat dreams?
what would be in his mind across time?
as night breezes blew over his fur sublime,
i think his dreams might be bestrewed
about romping with his feet filled of dew,
only some simple little wombat thoughts
that every other dreaming wombat sought.
°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*
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Re: a wombats dream
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by venkat on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 04:27:12 AM AEST
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| good good.. venkat |
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Re: a wombats dream
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by The_Phantom on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 05:57:44 AM AEST
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Well someone has found their pen, another great write nessa, fore I enjoy all of your work.
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Re: a wombats dream
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 07:19:12 AM AEST
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This really made me smile. It was just exactly what I needed to read this morning. Thank you Nessa.
Your friend,
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Re: a wombats dream
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 07:59:59 AM AEST
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a lighthearted good write
Shari |
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Re: a wombats dream
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by shelby on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 10:17:37 AM AEST
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what a sweet poem Nessa. Adorable!!
Michelle |
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Re: a wombats dream
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 06:32:32 AM AEST
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| Great poem Nessa ... love this one... Jan |
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Re: a wombats dream
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 09:22:46 AM AEST
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| real sweet Nessa, a simple and elegant little prose, thanks Hugs to ya, Val |
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Re: a wombats dream
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by LadyDama on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 03:33:35 PM AEST
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| nessa, i love this... oh, my imagination is running wild... thoughts of your precious little wombat give me a warm feeling inside... another excellent unique poem... blessings to you, michele |
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Re: a wombats dream
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by princesspurty on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 04:33:54 PM AEST
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| this is cute, a good question indeed, a very nice poem, luvs ya! |
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Re: a wombats dream
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by norm on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 02:29:27 PM AEST
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well, now...i wonder the magnitude of
your verse...you prove like creatures
must yen for each other. you have a
super way about you.. |
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Re: a wombats dream
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by Bongo on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 04:27:44 PM AEST
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Your thoughts i do treasure
Your company a pleasure
Your Wombat Dreams are written to to please
Your Wombat in fact, eats roots and leaves.
Thank you Ness. xx |
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Re: a wombats dream
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by Smooth on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 07:38:35 PM AEST
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omg! this is soooo cute. very original, I really enjoyed,this, nicely done Nessa.
what in tarnation would a wombat forsee,
within the confines of a dreaming spree,
it is so humbly that I state my thought,
that a wombat must dream of not getting caught.
lol |
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Re: a wombats dream
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2020 @ 11:52:39 PM AEST
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I once had a puppy named Mary.
She lived to be 15.
When she was little I/'/d play with her in the grass and call
her baby wombat.....she was my best buddy....
Tearing up...:( |
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