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Look no more for you will see nothing...
Breathe no more for I do not care...
Love no more for you are not capable...
Listen no more for you are deaf to my words...
Walk no more for you go nowhere...
Sleep no more for you will have nightmares...
Live no more for you are evil...
Fight no more for you will lose...
The day satan's breath came upon your neck and his hand upon your shoulder you abandoned me!
With that in mind I feel nothing for you so leave and let me be for I am no longer capable of caring for you.
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Satan's Touch

Contributed by Ember on Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Speak no more for I will not listen...
Look no more for you will see nothing...
Breathe no more for I do not care...
Love no more for you are not capable...
Listen no more for you are deaf to my words...
Walk no more for you go nowhere...
Sleep no more for you will have nightmares...
Live no more for you are evil...
Fight no more for you will lose...
The day satan's breath came upon your neck and his hand upon your shoulder you abandoned me!
With that in mind I feel nothing for you so leave and let me be for I am no longer capable of caring for you.




Copyright © Ember ... [ 2003-05-29 23:05:00]
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Re: Satan's Touch (User Rating: 1 )
by knowWhat_kind on Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 02:50:56 AM AEST
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That was a good poem kinda sad but it was good i liked it


Re: Satan's Touch (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 08:00:41 AM AEST
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Wow! This is really good. Great emotion. I really enjoyed it.

sleepless_siren


Re: Satan's Touch (User Rating: 1 )
by Ember on Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 01:34:03 PM AEST
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thankyou for your kind comments


Re: Satan's Touch (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 10:38:42 PM AEST
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This was bloody awesome, the way the words flowed together, and so full of meaning I liked.
Keep up the excellent writing.


Re: Satan's Touch (User Rating: 1 )
by Percursors on Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 04:23:46 PM AEST
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Well i think God loves us no matter wut...and if your cousin came back to him...i know God would love to have on of his children back...


Re: Satan's Touch (User Rating: 1 )
by Ember on Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 12:16:19 AM AEST
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hey cass,
thatnks for the comment ya i know God would take him back..but i was writing that from something like Gods point of view... i was writing it from how i feel bout the situation...i was talking bout demetrie and u've heard how he treats the people that try to help him so this is pretty much how i feel about it all.


Re: Satan's Touch (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken-glass on Tuesday, 26th August 2003 @ 10:38:04 AM AEST
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This is a very effective poem. Your anger is driven by deep raw emotion. It is delivered well and is very inspirational. Please read some of mine and tell me what you think....




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