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Black seas of beams and vines
Within all their grasps are souls entwined
One lone point focal
Not yet vocal

Souls climb! They yearn to rise!
Escape! This looming gripping demise!
Caught and held by ankles, neck and head.
Rash rebellion may leave one dead.

Explosions of light discover!
The act of truth's boisterous lovers.
The seeds, the plants, it all stands out.
Now what's needed, is a rallying shout.
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Rebellion Against Dark Oppression

Contributed by xHeathenx on Sunday, 26th July 2015 @ 07:34:06 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Black seas of beams and vines
Within all their grasps are souls entwined
One lone point focal
Not yet vocal

Souls climb! They yearn to rise!
Escape! This looming gripping demise!
Caught and held by ankles, neck and head.
Rash rebellion may leave one dead.

Explosions of light discover!
The act of truth's boisterous lovers.
The seeds, the plants, it all stands out.
Now what's needed, is a rallying shout.

Copyright © xHeathenx ... [ 2015-07-26 19:34:06]
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Re: Rebellion Against Dark Oppression (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 26th July 2015 @ 07:39:25 PM AEST
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Wow! Some vivid imagery going on in this piece...I am curious what inspired it? I always love the abstract twist you give your writes. Good job.

~Scorp

Re: Rebellion Against Dark Oppression (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 27th July 2015 @ 09:43:25 AM AEST
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I really like it.......
Freeing oneself from the dark.
Gives one hope!
Well written!

Re: Rebellion Against Dark Oppression (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Monday, 27th July 2015 @ 08:38:15 PM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B

Re: Rebellion Against Dark Oppression (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 26th August 2015 @ 12:13:02 AM AEST
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This is good (the rhyme is a bit forced) I do that too; I look too hard for the right word only to find the nonrhyming one is perfect.

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