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For love dies not a normal death
The eternal heart worries not
For under gentle breeze and heavy breath
Compassion and anguish both time has wrought

As sleeping eyes wander aimlessly
From within the depths of the heart rages an insatiable fire
As across vast miles like that of a boundless sea
Hands reach out and voices cry due to such desire

Until eternity ceases and ocean waves no longer caress their shores
From the recesses of an infinitesimal mind the soul is made aware of its plight
As mere mortals are shaken to deepest fathom of their cores
And midnight’s enduring hand strips away sight

As a calling card from a shadowed depth is sealed with a kiss
The sun no longer explodes with the essence of vitality
And nothing is left behind for a lifeless heart to miss
Bringing into focus a person’s mortality

Nessa and Rich
2015 [comments] => 9 [counter] => 367 [topic] => 21 [informant] => ingeniusidiot [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Symbiotic Love-Life and Death

Contributed by ingeniusidiot on Sunday, 19th July 2015 @ 12:47:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems




For love dies not a normal death
The eternal heart worries not
For under gentle breeze and heavy breath
Compassion and anguish both time has wrought

As sleeping eyes wander aimlessly
From within the depths of the heart rages an insatiable fire
As across vast miles like that of a boundless sea
Hands reach out and voices cry due to such desire

Until eternity ceases and ocean waves no longer caress their shores
From the recesses of an infinitesimal mind the soul is made aware of its plight
As mere mortals are shaken to deepest fathom of their cores
And midnight’s enduring hand strips away sight

As a calling card from a shadowed depth is sealed with a kiss
The sun no longer explodes with the essence of vitality
And nothing is left behind for a lifeless heart to miss
Bringing into focus a person’s mortality

Nessa and Rich
2015




Copyright © ingeniusidiot ... [ 2015-07-19 12:47:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Symbiotic Love-Life and Death (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Sunday, 19th July 2015 @ 01:55:06 PM AEST
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I love this!
Great write.

Hannah B


Re: Symbiotic Love-Life and Death (User Rating: 1 )
by irisblue on Sunday, 19th July 2015 @ 09:19:59 PM AEST
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wow! this is a masterpiece! beautifully written


Re: Symbiotic Love-Life and Death (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 20th July 2015 @ 04:24:00 AM AEST
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you are lovely to write with, and i love how it bloomed:)

hugs n' love nessa


Re: Symbiotic Love-Life and Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on Monday, 20th July 2015 @ 06:30:11 PM AEST
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A brilliant co op. Artfully crafted. I enjoyed reading this.

Fox


Re: Symbiotic Love-Life and Death (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 21st July 2015 @ 05:01:50 AM AEST
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Great poem!


Re: Symbiotic Love-Life and Death (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 21st July 2015 @ 11:21:30 AM AEST
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Good job guys!! Co-writes used to be a regular occurrence on here, but it has been awhile since I recall seeing one.
Smooth transition back and forth; you two mesh well.


Lovely poem! Thanks for sharing.



~Scorp


Re: Symbiotic Love-Life and Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd July 2015 @ 03:53:58 AM AEST
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As I read this, it made me think of how some think soul mates die and then meet each other again in a next life. Whether intentional or not, that's what came to mind as I read this beautifully crafted poem.

Great stuff, you two.

Thanks,

Tim


Re: Symbiotic Love-Life and Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 13th August 2015 @ 09:43:28 PM AEST
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Exquisite!! Love how it all blended. You guys write so well together. I miss co-writing. well I miss writing altogether :(



Re: Symbiotic Love-Life and Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 24th August 2015 @ 10:40:56 PM AEST
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Great poem. I like the style of this and the cosmic sense it gives to mortality.




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