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Re: aqthymml
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th May 2015 @ 02:28:55 AM AEST (User
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you're there tin
later than
like a roll of film
that is over exposed
just waiting for a new
moment to yearn
along for an old dog
in the moon
all you need is a good
storm to blow by
all you need
is already here
I really love this writing tin,
it could go on, and should
Well done!
Peace! |
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Re: aqthymml
(User Rating: 1 ) by Beyfoxman5 on
Sunday, 24th May 2015 @ 08:32:53 AM AEST (User
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When confusion meets clarity.
Best,
Fox |
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Re: aqthymml
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th May 2015 @ 06:47:40 PM AEST (User
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| It describes my present state very eloquently. I really like this poem. |
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