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Array ( [sid] => 18095 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Runaway [time] => 2003-05-27 15:35:00 [hometext] => i hate my life. [bodytext] => Goodbye, goodbye
Thats all i want to say,
I cant take another day,
My parents always fight,
All that holds me back,
Are my friends,
I know one day i will,
Say goodbye to everyone,
I will be one of those kids,
Whose faces show up on the milk carton,
I hate this life of mine,
So i say,
Goodbye, goodbye
Im sorry i couldnt take one more day,
Goodbye. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 371 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Chelly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Runaway

Contributed by Chelly on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Goodbye, goodbye
Thats all i want to say,
I cant take another day,
My parents always fight,
All that holds me back,
Are my friends,
I know one day i will,
Say goodbye to everyone,
I will be one of those kids,
Whose faces show up on the milk carton,
I hate this life of mine,
So i say,
Goodbye, goodbye
Im sorry i couldnt take one more day,
Goodbye.

Copyright © Chelly ... [ 2003-05-27 15:35:00]
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Re: Runaway (User Rating: 1 )
by Chelly on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 06:20:09 PM AEST
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bla bla bla

Re: Runaway (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 06:30:05 PM AEST
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hope you don't find this rude, but i don't think this is a poem - more of a cry for help. i don't doubt you have some great poetry in you but this seems like just a plea to all who know you. i really hope you don't run away - your problems will be right there waiting for you when you get back. be strong, keep writing, Kate x

Re: Runaway (User Rating: 1 )
by sublime86t on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 07:28:55 PM AEST
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i can really feel for you but running away if that is really what you intend to do will not solve anything, you should instead tru talking with someone from school like a guidence councler or even to your parents. i really liked your poem i felt that it really made me see what you were thinking and i think that, that is really what a poem should be.
good luck

Re: Runaway (User Rating: 1 )
by sublime86t on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 07:29:05 PM AEST
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i can really feel for you but running away if that is really what you intend to do will not solve anything, you should instead tru talking with someone from school like a guidence councler or even to your parents. i really liked your poem i felt that it really made me see what you were thinking and i think that, that is really what a poem should be.
good luck

Re: Runaway (User Rating: 1 )
by crossmyheartwithaknife on Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 06:02:41 PM AEST
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sometimes i feel exactly like this but even though i think about running away, i know i never will. at the most i'll runaway to a friend's house.

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