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Array ( [sid] => 180843 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ill-Fated Love [time] => 2015-03-24 17:10:28 [hometext] => By: E. Wayne Searles [bodytext] =>

The optimistic outcome
of an ill-fated love
So many years blinded
now asking for help from God above

No Idea where things have gone wrong
realizing I have been off track for a while
If I knew this love was doomed
I still would be in denial

As I sit back and think
denial is the world around me
I've tried so hard to be happy
but a fraudulent smile just won’t let me be

How is it that we build a palace
with a heart full of hopes and dreams
Then our vision is cleared
and nothing we have is really what it seems

True love and everlasting love
with the right person is hard to find
Spending many years in life
trying to find a special person without being blind

The outcome is usually not optimistic
of any love gone bad
Sometimes we just have to make life the best
and get over what we had

Doomed for a reason
which you may just not know
It will not always be easy
but you just have to let it go

No need to go hide in a cave
or bring your life to an end
Just find happiness in living
and listen to the wisdom of any a friend


Written on 24 March 2015
Copyright © 2015 E. Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
http://www.poeticquest-1.biglaunch.net
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Ill-Fated Love

Contributed by waynster on Tuesday, 24th March 2015 @ 05:10:28 PM in AEST
Topic: oops





The optimistic outcome
of an ill-fated love
So many years blinded
now asking for help from God above

No Idea where things have gone wrong
realizing I have been off track for a while
If I knew this love was doomed
I still would be in denial

As I sit back and think
denial is the world around me
I've tried so hard to be happy
but a fraudulent smile just won’t let me be

How is it that we build a palace
with a heart full of hopes and dreams
Then our vision is cleared
and nothing we have is really what it seems

True love and everlasting love
with the right person is hard to find
Spending many years in life
trying to find a special person without being blind

The outcome is usually not optimistic
of any love gone bad
Sometimes we just have to make life the best
and get over what we had

Doomed for a reason
which you may just not know
It will not always be easy
but you just have to let it go

No need to go hide in a cave
or bring your life to an end
Just find happiness in living
and listen to the wisdom of any a friend


Written on 24 March 2015
Copyright © 2015 E. Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
http://www.poeticquest-1.biglaunch.net




Copyright © waynster ... [ 2015-03-24 17:10:28]
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Re: Ill-Fated Love (User Rating: 1 )
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Re: Ill-Fated Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 03:32:47 PM AEST
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beautifully penned, you share your own struggles yet
stop at a place to leave your reader inspired!

hugs n' love nessa




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