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Array ( [sid] => 180504 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Loosen your noose [time] => 2015-02-10 00:57:28 [hometext] => This ones still in the workings, would love some feedback! [bodytext] => Each time you knot your tie you realize that you have let your dreams die
You wake up every morning safe and bored with nothing on the line
so loosen the noose to find,
That your breath has been restricted, by the title Mr. or Mrs.
You think you have to be a label just fit in with rest of the sheep in the stable
You are you, nothing old just something new, next time you should try looking at yourself nude
Because that is who you are, so stop trying to raise a social bar, you're not trendy clothes or the newest car
You are what you eat, and you become what you seek, you were who you were and that’s how it will be Its not too hard to see, that this world can give you anything you desire all you need to do is find what fuels your fire,
Just step back from society, get out of mansion because you are not all that high and mighty
You are just another cog, in a system that has done a good job at producing your mental fog,


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Loosen your noose

Contributed by Peacdrug on Tuesday, 10th February 2015 @ 12:57:28 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Each time you knot your tie you realize that you have let your dreams die
You wake up every morning safe and bored with nothing on the line
so loosen the noose to find,
That your breath has been restricted, by the title Mr. or Mrs.
You think you have to be a label just fit in with rest of the sheep in the stable
You are you, nothing old just something new, next time you should try looking at yourself nude
Because that is who you are, so stop trying to raise a social bar, you're not trendy clothes or the newest car
You are what you eat, and you become what you seek, you were who you were and that’s how it will be Its not too hard to see, that this world can give you anything you desire all you need to do is find what fuels your fire,
Just step back from society, get out of mansion because you are not all that high and mighty
You are just another cog, in a system that has done a good job at producing your mental fog,






Copyright © Peacdrug ... [ 2015-02-10 00:57:28]
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