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I drift into my zone
A word vomit parade
A tongue-lashing tirade

Against myself

Degrading myself in my chair
A hole into my soul I tear
I might stand around five feet ten
But according self-defacing words, I belong in a play pen

But why?

Why be so hard on myself
Inappropriate monologue, to the shelf
I'm done with this self-deprecating drill
If I don't believe in myself, no one else will

Inappropriate monologue, to the past
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Inappropriate Monologue

Contributed by Beyfoxman5 on Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 05:14:44 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

As I sit here alone
I drift into my zone
A word vomit parade
A tongue-lashing tirade

Against myself

Degrading myself in my chair
A hole into my soul I tear
I might stand around five feet ten
But according self-defacing words, I belong in a play pen

But why?

Why be so hard on myself
Inappropriate monologue, to the shelf
I'm done with this self-deprecating drill
If I don't believe in myself, no one else will

Inappropriate monologue, to the past
Come back for a second, I'll kick your ---

Copyright Â© Beyfoxman5 ... [ 2015-01-15 17:14:44]
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Re: Inappropriate Monologue (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 05:29:54 PM AEST
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That's the spirit! Find that confidence! Find that self-appreciation, that self-love! Without, you can't truly love another well. :)

Re: Inappropriate Monologue (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 07:01:41 PM AEST
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Waddup?! Good stuff here! I like raw words...to much polish isn't always the shiniest.

Dude, or Dudette, I have been (still am to a lesser degree of late) in your state. It sucks, but sometimes the only silver lining is you can bet your a** it won't last. Something good will happen.

Keep writing. It is very cathartic for me. I can tell it will help you.

Invierno

Re: Inappropriate Monologue (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 08:49:05 PM AEST
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There is greatness in us all. The gift you bring in your words is to aspire. Until you can believe it, no one else will.
Why do the old tapes play when they are no longer valid? Habit? Comfort zone? The pain that makes us feel at home.
Bravo for reminding us so cleverly that if we keep doing what we have always done…we will keep getting what we have always got!
I like your new recipe! Bon appetite!
softerware

Re: Inappropriate Monologue (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 11:32:54 PM AEST
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We are all our own worse critics. I really like this poem. Keepa a writin' and don't beat yourself up.

Psst, a little secret...it's okay to say ass here. Ass, ass ass. See? :)

Can't say this though --> *****. ;-)

Tim

Re: Inappropriate Monologue (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th January 2015 @ 08:44:11 PM AEST
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hard to stay focused on demerits for inappropriate
monologue, the smile next to you didn't have to say.
Breathe deepest past the tempest past the mood muddied up by personal dread. Yes, why: why why why
said the ball, said the sentence, said a broken fist
that can come from being thick as a brick, the wise men never knew what that was like, now did they?

I belong in a play pen too some days too. They'll never learn, what, or why

It's all just a convention, I think, or the better me just does.

Cool poem!

Peace!

Re: Inappropriate Monologue (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th January 2015 @ 08:49:41 PM AEST
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Oh, hee hee, Timotheous, we can say ASS,
I'm guilty of being one myself. Oh, from the lectern of
understanding who, anyone, who can come and read these poems.

Thanks my good man!

Peace!

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