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Draped in leather, silk, or mink!
Soft, unyielding, thick or thin;
Depends upon the mood she’s in!

Firm to fluid, dark to light;
Up and down all through the night!
Straight or crooked, zig then zag;
Stroke it, guide it, coax and drag!

Feed me more the monster wheedles!
Lest you suffer pins and needles!
Crossed-eyed now I court disaster!
I the servant, you the master!
Weav’in, bobb’in torn and tatern;
Bedeviled by the wayward pattern;

Foot up, foot down, Pressed between;
The nameless layers so it seams!
Judge me worthy, thou unbiased;
Maker of all things most highest!

I obey your every rule!
You the skillful; I the fool!
I sing the words, you merely hum;
Pray hurry for the end to come!

All at once the singer coughs!
I seize my chance and bite it off!
Cut the power; kill the lights
We have sewn enough tonight.

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You so and so

Contributed by softerware on Wednesday, 14th January 2015 @ 09:25:55 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

Black and purple, green and pink,
Draped in leather, silk, or mink!
Soft, unyielding, thick or thin;
Depends upon the mood she’s in!

Firm to fluid, dark to light;
Up and down all through the night!
Straight or crooked, zig then zag;
Stroke it, guide it, coax and drag!

Feed me more the monster wheedles!
Lest you suffer pins and needles!
Crossed-eyed now I court disaster!
I the servant, you the master!
Weav’in, bobb’in torn and tatern;
Bedeviled by the wayward pattern;

Foot up, foot down, Pressed between;
The nameless layers so it seams!
Judge me worthy, thou unbiased;
Maker of all things most highest!

I obey your every rule!
You the skillful; I the fool!
I sing the words, you merely hum;
Pray hurry for the end to come!

All at once the singer coughs!
I seize my chance and bite it off!
Cut the power; kill the lights
We have sewn enough tonight.

Copyright Â© softerware ... [ 2015-01-14 21:25:55]
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Re: You so and so (User Rating: 1 )
by sanders on Wednesday, 14th January 2015 @ 10:15:41 PM AEST
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nicely woven , captivating
seducing , brilliant poetry...
hats off friend :)

Re: You so and so (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th January 2015 @ 11:41:19 PM AEST
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Oooooooh! You mean you sew and sew!!! lol. D'oh! Great one!!!

Re: You so and so (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 11:15:44 AM AEST
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Ah that's clever! I didn't fully understand until I saw Timotheous's comment, and then it made sense. I was thinking along the lines of it starting with a man in a more submissive role in a relationship. Good poem, love the rhythm, rhymes, words used, and emotion therein.

Re: You so and so (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 07:07:58 PM AEST
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Applause!!!!!!1 read it as fast as (I think, like a good canter) the style begged and it was flawless- the pattern was as smooth as a champion horse running laps at dawn in the mist, with silence all around but hooves on dirt.

Spicy stuff! A really nice fun read..thanks for sharing this.

Invierno

Re: You so and so (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 10:22:00 PM AEST
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Smiles & Hugs. . .
Oh. . .
& a huge bravo!

Re: You so and so (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 30th January 2015 @ 03:04:44 PM AEST
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To make people smile and laugh is truly a gift.
You did that here, you really sneaked up on me with this one.
Once again, glad I read :-)

Steve

Re: You so and so (User Rating: 1 )
by Pogivic on Sunday, 29th March 2015 @ 09:09:23 PM AEST
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Your poems seem to leave me astonished at how they can play in my mind until it all comes together and I think, How beautifully written. I can read it again and get even more meaning from it.

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