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Failed
Contributed by
Kane
on
Friday, 23rd May 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkness has set, I'm on my last breathe,
One shot, give it all I got,
Open up to this world of hate, accept my fate,
Release my soul, just let me go,
Eye to eye, the man in the mirror tell him to die,
Pull the gun from the case, aim it at my face,
Pull the trigger, it's empty go figure,
Once agan I've failed, the air here is stale,
The smell of decay, as night swallows day,
The sun does not shine, demons playing with my mind,
Tears of blood, fall from a heart with no love,
Fall on a bed of nails, face first as I'm impaled,
Dreams of death, smell of burning flesh,
Close my eyes, as blood boils inside,
The pain eats, when I think it's over, it just repetes,
Torment, feelings that are dorment,
My heart no longer beats, but still I can't sleep,
Surrender everything, let the demons began feeding,
Lay there in wait, while satan makes his plate,
Give me the power, watch as this world is devored.
Heart & Soul
Kane
Copyright ©
Kane
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2003-05-23 04:05:00]
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Re: Failed
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by PhantomsLDY on
Sunday, 25th May 2003 @ 09:38:11 PM AEST
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| This is a really great write. I'm not one for the darker stuff really but this is really good. |
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Re: Failed
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 12:35:09 AM AEST
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| Yes Kane I'm not either into the darker poetry but this was well done! Christina |
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Re: Failed
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by Kane on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 02:53:39 AM AEST
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Thank you for your comments, it truly made my night.
Kane |
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