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Array ( [sid] => 179452 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye [time] => 2014-10-14 15:30:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Do not help me,
do not show me what
there is to live for.
I'd rather not know what others
love, I just dont care
it was never me.

I tried to find who I was ment to be,
but always find failure.

If I am found with this note
then for once I have succeded,
to those who whished me dead
you're to slow, tell anyone who wants to
say goodbye I'll see you at the end.

Dont try and stop me,
for I am tired of proving no matter
what this never ends.

I've spent too much time being the rock
for other people.
How funny that a rock
now marks my crown.
In my polished little box. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 272 [topic] => 13 [informant] => mick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Goodbye

Contributed by mick on Tuesday, 14th October 2014 @ 03:30:26 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Do not help me,
do not show me what
there is to live for.
I'd rather not know what others
love, I just dont care
it was never me.

I tried to find who I was ment to be,
but always find failure.

If I am found with this note
then for once I have succeded,
to those who whished me dead
you're to slow, tell anyone who wants to
say goodbye I'll see you at the end.

Dont try and stop me,
for I am tired of proving no matter
what this never ends.

I've spent too much time being the rock
for other people.
How funny that a rock
now marks my crown.
In my polished little box.

Copyright © mick ... [ 2014-10-14 15:30:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Wednesday, 15th October 2014 @ 06:40:41 AM AEST
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Great job Mick. Being 'the rock' is not easy. I know, same as you. I wrote some poem a while back on this subject. "If They Only Knew" covers the same (for me, anyway) fear and instability I feel at having to be "The Man' for everyone all the time.

I really like this Mick. Thanks for sharing.

Invierno

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 15th October 2014 @ 04:35:06 PM AEST
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This is so sad, the ending just touched my heart so deeply.

Hugs
Michelle

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 19th October 2014 @ 07:45:47 PM AEST
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if purely artistic:: wicked good- tho if pouring of feelings- so sad, if you want to talk i'm here,

big hugs n' love nessa

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Wednesday, 29th October 2014 @ 01:03:22 PM AEST
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Very intense and truth felt. Great poetry makes us feel. I feel you...

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