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You always challenge me
In appropriate ways
Like it's supposed to be

You make me a better person
I will continue on for you
Enjoying these precious moments
Experiencing life anew

I am in awe of you
You really amaze me
Wisdom and charm in spades-
An angel, I can see

You are my spry aura of light
I giggle more when around you
With a halo shining brightly
Also; my superhero too

I am in love with you
You gave my life purpose
I hope you love me too
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Dynamic Duo

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 4th October 2014 @ 12:24:31 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

I am so proud of you
You always challenge me
In appropriate ways
Like it's supposed to be

You make me a better person
I will continue on for you
Enjoying these precious moments
Experiencing life anew

I am in awe of you
You really amaze me
Wisdom and charm in spades-
An angel, I can see

You are my spry aura of light
I giggle more when around you
With a halo shining brightly
Also; my superhero too

I am in love with you
You gave my life purpose
I hope you love me too
You- my beautiful son.

Copyright © hauntedscorp ... [ 2014-10-04 00:24:31]
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Re: Dynamic Duo (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Saturday, 4th October 2014 @ 01:12:28 AM AEST
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Very lovely, the one this is written to is lucky to have such love
It was a beautiful flow that made me smile.
Thank you
Regan

Re: Dynamic Duo (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th October 2014 @ 11:01:52 AM AEST
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Love that forth stanza. Well, I mean I see what you did there. ;-)

Perfect poem for the perfect dynamic duo!!!

Re: Dynamic Duo (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 4th October 2014 @ 12:17:21 PM AEST
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awww! this is sooo sweet and beautiful! kids are the best, the only perfect love:) blessings,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Dynamic Duo (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 4th October 2014 @ 12:37:29 PM AEST
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Scorp-- You always hit my heart with your ability to reveal yourself. A surprise ending arrives that totally fits the dedication! Here I am thinking "romance", and the closing line is a masterful "awww" . Undeniable.
You have never stood taller than in this moment.
Well done!
softerware

Re: Dynamic Duo (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 5th October 2014 @ 02:30:05 AM AEST
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man this is nice
A dousing of true love
absolute
every children's book
in the whole library
in this mere poem

And you read on
like they were written just for
you two who will face
this world together..
The Dyamic Duo

The roots of love
I was absolutely love struck
with my beautiful son
still am, although now
he's a teen
but he's still my best pal

fantastic poem!

Thanks scorp!

Peace!

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