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Reflecting the one you are and the one you try to be
Your carefree laugh can make me laugh
Cynically at your performance
Yet hopefully for a turn around
Young lady, yes I address you as such
Why do you attempt to defy perfection

Silky golden waves surround your face
A witty and cheerful smile comes next
Let's mention those eyes again
Wide with wonder yet beady with observation
Accentuated by a chocolate tint

All truly depicts a girlish persona for us to see
There is no way to otherwise to convince me
You are as the Lord fashioned you
Those fancies you have are mere distractions
That wish to steer you from
Representing divine creation [comments] => 6 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Deidra_Carmichael [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
Those Eyes

Contributed by Deidra_Carmichael on Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 08:07:33 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Those eyes tell me two stories
Reflecting the one you are and the one you try to be
Your carefree laugh can make me laugh
Cynically at your performance
Yet hopefully for a turn around
Young lady, yes I address you as such
Why do you attempt to defy perfection

Silky golden waves surround your face
A witty and cheerful smile comes next
Let's mention those eyes again
Wide with wonder yet beady with observation
Accentuated by a chocolate tint

All truly depicts a girlish persona for us to see
There is no way to otherwise to convince me
You are as the Lord fashioned you
Those fancies you have are mere distractions
That wish to steer you from
Representing divine creation




Copyright © Deidra_Carmichael ... [ 2014-08-03 20:07:33]
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Re: Those Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 08:18:21 PM AEST
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Beautiful. I very much enjoyed this read.

Invierno


Re: Those Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 4th August 2014 @ 12:20:41 AM AEST
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WOW, such a beautiful read. Thank you.


Re: Those Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Blackheart on Monday, 4th August 2014 @ 03:21:12 PM AEST
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This is what I call Heart & Soul. Lovely poem, hope you show this to them because believe me, it'll do wonders for them on the inside

-Blackheart


Re: Those Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by FindingMyself on Monday, 4th August 2014 @ 04:19:42 PM AEST
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This is amazing I really enjoyed it


Re: Those Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 4th August 2014 @ 05:12:18 PM AEST
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she sounds lovely, this is so beautifully penned,

hugs n' love nessa


Re: Those Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by JohnRhinem on Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 04:37:37 PM AEST
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You paint her so wonderfully this baby girl! Innocence struggling against impressionism's elite de factos ~ Beautiful, and one can see your poetic's gift....




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