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::rapture::
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Tuesday, 29th July 2014 @ 07:17:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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little bird so soft and sweet
grabs flying bug in her beak
flowers bloom in lovely scent
branches lean slightly bent
and through greens of trees
earth- quietly the sun it sees
of mighty life- rustling forest
everything after rain porous
trees hold sympathys ruth
breathing in innocent truth
secrets that the earth kept
tears that pines have wept
no more beautiful than this
image face- mountain mists
matters not- a moon so high
to move the earth and skies
ever silent- grasses swirled
each heart walks in worlds
animals validating their race
as nature ever runs in place
breezes blow as rivers flow
sun it sets most rosey glows
whilst one wonders of mars
as wind sighs between stars
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Re: ::rapture::
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 29th July 2014 @ 10:22:14 PM AEST
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Simply beautiful!! Sets me in the right mood as I prepare to leave for my mini beach vacation....
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 29th July 2014 @ 10:43:29 PM AEST
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Love the way this flows
Excellent,
thanx for sharing.... |
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Re: ::rapture::
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th July 2014 @ 12:42:26 AM AEST
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The poem is titled perfectly!!!! It sums up what this poem is and the feeling in conveys. I truly loved traveling through the scenes you created here.
Thank you.
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Re: ::rapture::
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by Archie on
Thursday, 31st July 2014 @ 10:28:32 AM AEST
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| This is very good, I am impressed by your imagery and couplets of rhyme throughout your poem. |
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Re: ::rapture::
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 1st August 2014 @ 04:35:59 PM AEST
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Hello Nessa
Well first I love this poem for the fact that it rhymes and flows well. Then there is the story. Nature is always beautiful it calms the mind and soothes the soul. Beautiful write. Blessings
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Re: ::rapture::
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 2nd August 2014 @ 10:12:37 AM AEST
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Very well done, Nessa. Others beat me to the punch on comments..mine would be redundant.
As usual, you produce fine pieces that evoke what you intend to be evoked.
I thank you,
Invierno |
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Re: ::rapture::
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by Blackheart on
Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 11:16:31 AM AEST
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Elegantly written, it makes me think of being at my favorite place in NYC, because the first thing that comes to mind from this is peacefulness. Lovely :)
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Donavan |
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Re: ::rapture::
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by colinb on
Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 01:50:02 PM AEST
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| Beautiful Nessa |
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Re: ::rapture::
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by spud on
Thursday, 7th August 2014 @ 01:41:15 PM AEST
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Hi Nessa,
Beautifully described! You took me there!
T
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Re: ::rapture::
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by JohnRhinem on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 05:27:02 PM AEST
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| Poor little bug carried away she may have been a beatle ? Stirs the heart thinking that any life should ever need perish for any reason ~ That's why we have to make it to Zion inside the city's walls where nay, life shall ever see death let alone pain ~ Yet, this magical verse takes us nearly there in all of it's splendours: very lovely.... |
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 9th September 2014 @ 09:15:18 AM AEST
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You have done a great job with this one! I really love it. Beautiful and abundant imagery with a near flawless flow.
Well done!
~Scorp |
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by Flex4life13 on
Thursday, 23rd October 2014 @ 06:36:55 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write! There is nothing more gentle, more precious than nature! |
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by weemick on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 07:27:58 PM AEST
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| Hi Nessa, you bring before us the glory of nature. I always find great peace when I let my eyes see the true glory and wonder of nature. For the bird to eat the bug, Is that nature being harsh, no, that Is but survival. You bring before us nature clothed In Its finery. Let your pen ever run and may you paint for us such peace through your words, to bring Inner peace to our hearts. Such Is the rapture you give to us, the joy and the blessing of peace through this write. May your pen ever run gold. Have a good day. Your Friend always....MIKE. |
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 05:05:04 PM AEST
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| I love this poem because of its observation of subtle beauty. It shows an appreciation for a bent branch, and a swirled grass. Things that most people never notice, are the most beautiful things. |
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