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He texted me today
I didn't know what to say
He said he still loved me
And then he called me baby

He asked me to be his
Well now that's a twist
Didn't see it coming
But oh I was so lonely
So took I him back
Didn't think back to the past
Now I'm walking on broken glass
Cause I took him back

I wish I had of said no
But I didn't wanna let go
Don't wanna wait too long
I've gotta fix what's wrong

He asked me to be his
Well now that's a twist
Didn't see it coming
But oh I was so lonely
So took I him back
Didn't think back to the past
Now I'm walking on broken glass
Cause I took him back

How could I have been so dumb
Oh he played me like a drum
He only wants one thing
I'm like a puppet on his string
Cause he only wants one thing

But I took him back
It all happened too fast
we're gonna repeat the past
Why did I take him back

He asked me to be his
Well now that's a twist
Didn't see it coming
But oh I was so lonely
So took I him back
Didn't think back to the past
Now I'm walking on broken glass
Cause I took him back
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I Took Him Back

Contributed by Josieee329 on Saturday, 19th July 2014 @ 11:34:53 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



"I Took Him Back"

He texted me today
I didn't know what to say
He said he still loved me
And then he called me baby

He asked me to be his
Well now that's a twist
Didn't see it coming
But oh I was so lonely
So took I him back
Didn't think back to the past
Now I'm walking on broken glass
Cause I took him back

I wish I had of said no
But I didn't wanna let go
Don't wanna wait too long
I've gotta fix what's wrong

He asked me to be his
Well now that's a twist
Didn't see it coming
But oh I was so lonely
So took I him back
Didn't think back to the past
Now I'm walking on broken glass
Cause I took him back

How could I have been so dumb
Oh he played me like a drum
He only wants one thing
I'm like a puppet on his string
Cause he only wants one thing

But I took him back
It all happened too fast
we're gonna repeat the past
Why did I take him back

He asked me to be his
Well now that's a twist
Didn't see it coming
But oh I was so lonely
So took I him back
Didn't think back to the past
Now I'm walking on broken glass
Cause I took him back




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Re: I Took Him Back (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 19th July 2014 @ 11:52:27 AM AEST
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wow, what a poem! hmm... have to say it- although it may work out in the long run and
one day be blissful; i am thinking you have done yourself a dis-service and settled- that
you know full well you deserve better; yet loneliness has had too much of a say in how
and who with you spend your time, don't short change yourself! you deserve happiness
and rainbows! ...anyway, this poem is beautifully penned, blessings,

hugs n' love nessa


Re: I Took Him Back (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th July 2014 @ 10:33:36 PM AEST
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abolish abolish, "well now that's a twist"
the very moment where two roads cross

but one can't! I really love this prospective
--- no you won't bleed again
because you know.

reminds me of a song I never knew the lyrics to but your poem seems so original.

Well done! Make him your puppet or let him go!

Best!

Peace!


Re: I Took Him Back (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 1st August 2014 @ 07:03:24 PM AEST
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I like the way you have emphasised what you expect to be the inevitable in taking him back.
Amazing how the past has a way of coming back to haunt us, we cling to that vain thread of hope that things will change but all the time contrasting that with a notion that they won't.

Steve




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