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Array ( [sid] => 178743 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => With My Back Against Wall.... [time] => 2014-07-08 13:27:37 [hometext] => Things get hard for us humans from time to time and there are more questions than answers, and this is most frustrating. [bodytext] => 08:07:2014....

With my back against the wall.
Around me all seems to fall.
Tumbling tumbling crashing down.
Why does it seem You look upon me with a frown.
I know You won't burden me.
Please look again I'm not strong like tree.

With my back against the wall.
Somehow the ask is too tall.
I can't find the solution.
How do I come to a conclusion?
This time round things are just too hard.
The struggle is leaving me scarred.

With my back against the wall.
I beseech Thee don't let me fall.
Show me the way out of this maze.
The struggle's unbearable these past few days.
At this crossroad which way do I go?
Please please won't You show.
I'm about to give up.
These hurdles over flow my cup.

RR [comments] => 3 [counter] => 259 [topic] => 75 [informant] => RussellReinhardt [notes] => Edited as requested ~ Moderator_18 July 8, 2014 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

With My Back Against Wall....

Contributed by RussellReinhardt on Tuesday, 8th July 2014 @ 01:27:37 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

08:07:2014....

With my back against the wall.
Around me all seems to fall.
Tumbling tumbling crashing down.
Why does it seem You look upon me with a frown.
I know You won't burden me.
Please look again I'm not strong like tree.

With my back against the wall.
Somehow the ask is too tall.
I can't find the solution.
How do I come to a conclusion?
This time round things are just too hard.
The struggle is leaving me scarred.

With my back against the wall.
I beseech Thee don't let me fall.
Show me the way out of this maze.
The struggle's unbearable these past few days.
At this crossroad which way do I go?
Please please won't You show.
I'm about to give up.
These hurdles over flow my cup.

RR

Copyright © RussellReinhardt ... [ 2014-07-08 13:27:37]
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Re: With My Back Against Wall.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 8th July 2014 @ 03:52:38 PM AEST
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This is pretty good and reminds me of one of my songs. Check out "Your Love Goes On and On" and tell me what you think- if you want to. Your write has merit. That is a good thing.

Re: With My Back Against Wall.... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 8th July 2014 @ 05:36:17 PM AEST
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beautiful expression, sometimes we all feel like this you are
not alone, -hang in there and if you do need ever to talk my friend
i'm always here,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: With My Back Against Wall.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Sunday, 13th July 2014 @ 11:30:07 AM AEST
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Hello My Friend. So nice to see you posting. So sad to read the post. I wish I could be there, right there, with you. What I can give you, and it is my most valuable commodity I posses in this world, is my time. Please message me and let me help (if I can- not assuming I will be able to) by sharing your angst and knowing a caring friend is considering your words and a reply will be forthcoming. I shall sally forth and gather some sage, the better to dispense from my mental pharmacy.

Thinking of you and sending positive energy across the Atlantic directly to you. Your heart will have to serve as the beacon, so radiate peace and serenity, the easier for me to find you.

Best to you,

Invierno

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