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Array ( [sid] => 178625 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => So Much More [time] => 2014-06-26 17:03:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => So much of me
and so much of you
lies between us in glances
and near whispers

So much of my soul
wants to trickle out
from the corners of my eyes
and the quirk of my lips
And so much of your soul
is buried in your shirtsleeves
and in between your piano fingers

So much of your joy is hidden
in the metallic hues of your gaze
like an elevator door closing
and leaving me behind
And so much of my joy
is ripped right out of my chest
when you turn your head sideways and away
away from my hungry face

And I wish
I wish for so much more
so much more of you [comments] => 3 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ruza [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

So Much More

Contributed by ruza on Thursday, 26th June 2014 @ 05:03:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

So much of me
and so much of you
lies between us in glances
and near whispers

So much of my soul
wants to trickle out
from the corners of my eyes
and the quirk of my lips
And so much of your soul
is buried in your shirtsleeves
and in between your piano fingers

So much of your joy is hidden
in the metallic hues of your gaze
like an elevator door closing
and leaving me behind
And so much of my joy
is ripped right out of my chest
when you turn your head sideways and away
away from my hungry face

And I wish
I wish for so much more
so much more of you

Copyright © ruza ... [ 2014-06-26 17:03:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: So Much More (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 26th June 2014 @ 05:43:44 PM AEST
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This is genuinely brilliant, its like a less filtered version of some of the fabulous work in Leonard Cohen's Book of Longing :-) one of my favourites, well done

Re: So Much More (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 26th June 2014 @ 06:56:40 PM AEST
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a beautiful write, the longing is tangible...........

hugs n' love nessa

Re: So Much More (User Rating: 1 )
by Ferrari14 on Friday, 27th June 2014 @ 06:45:11 PM AEST
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Unique

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