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CANT STAND TO SEE YOU LIKE THIS IT MAKES ME FEEL BAD.

I REALLY WANT TO HELP YOU BUT I DONT
KNOW WHAT TO DO YOU SAY YOU ARE ALRIGHT BUT I KNOW THATS NOT TRUE.

I WATCH YOU STRUGGLE MORE AND MORE
EVERY DAY TRYING TO MAKE ENDS MEET
TRYING TO FIND YOUR WAY.

YOU HAVE ALWAYS TOLD ME THE LORD
WILL PULL YOU THROUGH LEAVE HIM ALL
YOUR BURDENS THATS ALL YOU HAVE
TO DO.

I MAY NOT GO TO CHURCH ALL THE TIME
LIKE YOU DO BUT THAT DOESNT MEAN I
DONT KNOW WHAT THE LORD CAN DO.

I WANT YOU TO PRAY AND TAKE A LITTLE TIME AND TELL THE LORD YOUR PROBLEMS AND HE WILL FIND A WAY.

YOU ARE A VERY SPEACIAL WOMAN AND I MEAN THAT FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART. YOU MAY NOT HAVE GAVE BIRTH TO ME BUT YOU HAVE TAUGHT ME ALOT

I FEEL THAT I AM SO LUCKY TO HAVE TWO
SETS OF VERY SPEACIAL PARENTS IN MY LIFE MOST PEOPLE ONLY GET ONE BUT
I GOT TWO I LOVE YOU.

RENEE

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DONT CRY MOM

Contributed by renee on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

DONT CRY MOM YOU LOOK SO SAD AND I
CANT STAND TO SEE YOU LIKE THIS IT MAKES ME FEEL BAD.

I REALLY WANT TO HELP YOU BUT I DONT
KNOW WHAT TO DO YOU SAY YOU ARE ALRIGHT BUT I KNOW THATS NOT TRUE.

I WATCH YOU STRUGGLE MORE AND MORE
EVERY DAY TRYING TO MAKE ENDS MEET
TRYING TO FIND YOUR WAY.

YOU HAVE ALWAYS TOLD ME THE LORD
WILL PULL YOU THROUGH LEAVE HIM ALL
YOUR BURDENS THATS ALL YOU HAVE
TO DO.

I MAY NOT GO TO CHURCH ALL THE TIME
LIKE YOU DO BUT THAT DOESNT MEAN I
DONT KNOW WHAT THE LORD CAN DO.

I WANT YOU TO PRAY AND TAKE A LITTLE TIME AND TELL THE LORD YOUR PROBLEMS AND HE WILL FIND A WAY.

YOU ARE A VERY SPEACIAL WOMAN AND I MEAN THAT FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART. YOU MAY NOT HAVE GAVE BIRTH TO ME BUT YOU HAVE TAUGHT ME ALOT

I FEEL THAT I AM SO LUCKY TO HAVE TWO
SETS OF VERY SPEACIAL PARENTS IN MY LIFE MOST PEOPLE ONLY GET ONE BUT
I GOT TWO I LOVE YOU.

RENEE

Copyright © renee ... [ 2003-05-20 10:05:00]
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Re: DONT CRY MOM (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 12:09:45 PM AEST
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This is a very sad poem, Renee. i hope your mum works out her problems soon. I don't personally believe in God, but don't let her give up on him if he keeps her strong.
good luck, Emily

Re: DONT CRY MOM (User Rating: 1 )
by Dot on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 02:54:58 PM AEST
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Renee, this is such a sweet poem. It's so touching-I hope you showed your poem to her. Bless you, Dot

Re: DONT CRY MOM (User Rating: 1 )
by obsidian_angel on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 08:18:49 AM AEST
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its really cool you think so highly of your mum, she's very lucky to have a kid like you. well done your poetry's great!

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