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Array ( [sid] => 17819 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A tragic loss of love [time] => 2003-05-19 17:35:00 [hometext] => This poem is really emotional if you put your mind into it, I wanted to cry when I wrote this poem, but I really like this poem. [bodytext] => As I watch your lonely grave
I remember that tragic day
the day you died
Your pierced heart that was shot
bleeding to the ground
A heartache poured into me
The pain of looking at your
fatal demise drove me to my knees
I sat there with you in my arms
crying, yelling for help
but no one was there to hear me
calling out for them
My eyes grew into dark
clouds of sorrow
My tears grew more and more
like a storm
My heart was trembling
like thunder
It was so hard to let you go
You faded away
like a cloud of dust
in my arms
Broken like shattered glass
you died a tragic death. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 634 [topic] => 22 [informant] => youngpoet1989 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 29 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

A tragic loss of love

Contributed by youngpoet1989 on Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

As I watch your lonely grave
I remember that tragic day
the day you died
Your pierced heart that was shot
bleeding to the ground
A heartache poured into me
The pain of looking at your
fatal demise drove me to my knees
I sat there with you in my arms
crying, yelling for help
but no one was there to hear me
calling out for them
My eyes grew into dark
clouds of sorrow
My tears grew more and more
like a storm
My heart was trembling
like thunder
It was so hard to let you go
You faded away
like a cloud of dust
in my arms
Broken like shattered glass
you died a tragic death.

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Re: A tragic loss of love (User Rating: 1 )
by JJTiger on Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 06:25:07 PM AEST
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Very touching poem. Good write.

Re: A tragic loss of love (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 06:36:56 PM AEST
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I realy loved this poema nd am very sorry for your loss. Losing someone...ok i'm not a person to give advice to you about stuff like that. But I really did like this poem. Love:::Kirby

Re: A tragic loss of love (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 05:23:39 AM AEST
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Sorry for a your loss, I know of the pain you bare.
It was an awesome poem, but very sad, so heart felt and painful, Im gladed you shared this one.
Keep up the beautiful writting.

Re: A tragic loss of love (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 09:52:55 AM AEST
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So very touching poem,must have been hard to write! Christina

Re: A tragic loss of love (User Rating: 1 )
by youngpoet1989 on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 12:54:01 AM AEST
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Thank you for your comments, but I didn't write this poem bcuz I lost someone in my life. I guess it does seem like that when you read it. Oh well just for you guys to know I didn't lose anyone.

Re: A tragic loss of love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 07:47:39 AM AEST
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Awesome poem!! And reading your comment makes it even more so... You have captured the loss really well here. Great one!!
Jenni

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