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Wanna get rid of it,
This is how it starts,
You throw away the pain and the voices in your ear,
You throw away the doubts that say hope is not near,
Because when you were a kid, your eyes would beam,
They could only grasp onto the thing that is a dream,
"You can be anything you want",
That is what my parents said,
I had some of the craziest ideas in my head,
"I wanna be an astronaut, no, I wanna be a soldier!"
Thinking about the ideas makes me wanna get hit by a boulder,
But even if they were crazy, they made me believe,
They made me believe that I had something to achieve,
So that is my lesson about never giving in,
You can never stop,
You can only begin.
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Hold On

Contributed by Senates on Sunday, 23rd February 2014 @ 11:55:55 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Fear is the weakness inside of our hearts,
Wanna get rid of it,
This is how it starts,
You throw away the pain and the voices in your ear,
You throw away the doubts that say hope is not near,
Because when you were a kid, your eyes would beam,
They could only grasp onto the thing that is a dream,
"You can be anything you want",
That is what my parents said,
I had some of the craziest ideas in my head,
"I wanna be an astronaut, no, I wanna be a soldier!"
Thinking about the ideas makes me wanna get hit by a boulder,
But even if they were crazy, they made me believe,
They made me believe that I had something to achieve,
So that is my lesson about never giving in,
You can never stop,
You can only begin.

Copyright © Senates ... [ 2014-02-23 23:55:55]
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Re: Hold On (User Rating: 1 )
by gypsymaddness on Tuesday, 25th February 2014 @ 02:26:35 AM AEST
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Oh wow. This is beautiful! You should have put it under the topic of inspirational because this poem makes one feel inspired to believe again. I got chills as I read this. I was thrust back to my childhood and the innocence I had before life crumbled me when I read your poem.
It made me wish to dream again...

Very beautiful and moving.

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