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Where your heart is.
You'll still our guardian angel
To keep us from harm.
Me and our kids.

If you must go want Promise
There want be tears.
Your heart, love, will soar
Thru eternity's years.

Our happy moments will
Survive our Earthly realm.
It's ours alone.
No one will ever take
Our times away with them.

Life didn't go as we thought.
Of course thru time that's
The way it goes.
Still all of our children
Live on as our legacy, we know. [comments] => 14 [counter] => 494 [topic] => 55 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

IF YOU MUST GO

Contributed by emystar on Monday, 11th November 2013 @ 04:20:19 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

You'll have a new body in re birth
Where your heart is.
You'll still our guardian angel
To keep us from harm.
Me and our kids.

If you must go want Promise
There want be tears.
Your heart, love, will soar
Thru eternity's years.

Our happy moments will
Survive our Earthly realm.
It's ours alone.
No one will ever take
Our times away with them.

Life didn't go as we thought.
Of course thru time that's
The way it goes.
Still all of our children
Live on as our legacy, we know.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2013-11-11 04:20:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: IF YOU MUST GO (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Monday, 11th November 2013 @ 06:26:40 AM AEST
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Saddening.

Re: IF YOU MUST GO (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Monday, 11th November 2013 @ 01:20:44 PM AEST
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Very emotional

Re: IF YOU MUST GO (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th November 2013 @ 02:59:40 PM AEST
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Beautifully sad, Emy. :( :)

Re: IF YOU MUST GO (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 12th November 2013 @ 11:30:58 AM AEST
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Well written, bud sad.
Great word usage, really makes me think.

Re: IF YOU MUST GO (User Rating: 1 )
by euphoema on Tuesday, 12th November 2013 @ 02:13:13 PM AEST
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at the same time this poem is sad and happy...nice! joyfultears!!!

Re: IF YOU MUST GO (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 13th November 2013 @ 12:59:01 AM AEST
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bitter sweet hugs lady

Michelle

Re: IF YOU MUST GO (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 13th November 2013 @ 02:44:40 PM AEST
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Our happy moments will
Survive our Earthly realm.

That line right there sums it up for me. There is frank honesty in this piece. The love is undeniable, but the resolve to not be destroyed by a fork in the road is palatable. This is well written and well expressed, Emy. Great job.

~Scorp

Re: IF YOU MUST GO (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 19th November 2013 @ 07:54:09 AM AEST
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If you go take me with you :)

Re: IF YOU MUST GO (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Sunday, 15th December 2013 @ 05:31:34 PM AEST
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As always Emy a beautiful write, I didn't realize you were still posting here but so glad you are :)

Re: IF YOU MUST GO (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 10th February 2014 @ 06:33:19 PM AEST
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sadly beautiful

Re: IF YOU MUST GO (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Sunday, 13th April 2014 @ 07:59:04 PM AEST
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Brought a tear with your beautiful words.
I hope all is well with you and yours!
Thank you for sharing, dear lady!
Hugs,
Michael

Re: IF YOU MUST GO (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 15th May 2014 @ 11:02:44 PM AEST
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{{{{emy}}}} so heartbreaking! beautifully written in
a positive way, blessings,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: IF YOU MUST GO (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 11:25:26 AM AEST
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bravo emystar

Invierno

Re: IF YOU MUST GO (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 26th February 2018 @ 05:41:23 PM AEST
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Lovely but sad and true!

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