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[title] => In Search Of The Vision
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[bodytext] => The night before I was broken,
Picking up my bits and pieces frozen.
Assembling them up with my tears,
What I’ve been doing for many years.
Tossing and turning is what I do all night,
Don’t understand why I feel so uptight.
This feeling I have, is unknown to me,
Wish I could feel it by all means.
Trail of tears soak my face,
Leaving me wonder, what’s my fate?
Expectantly I look up at the sky,
Hoping HE would answer to my cry!
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In Search Of The Vision
Contributed by
Saira
on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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The night before I was broken,
Picking up my bits and pieces frozen.
Assembling them up with my tears,
What I’ve been doing for many years.
Tossing and turning is what I do all night,
Don’t understand why I feel so uptight.
This feeling I have, is unknown to me,
Wish I could feel it by all means.
Trail of tears soak my face,
Leaving me wonder, what’s my fate?
Expectantly I look up at the sky,
Hoping HE would answer to my cry!
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Saira
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2003-05-17 13:05:00]
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Re: In Search Of The Vision
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 01:50:26 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Prudent.... This is a lovely write.. sad tho...hope all works out..
Jenni |
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Re: In Search Of The Vision
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 03:54:21 PM AEST
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| awww hugs** and warm welcome to ypdc too:) nessa |
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Re: In Search Of The Vision
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 06:35:09 PM AEST
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| very nice poetry ....shows ur talent in this field.keep it up!. |
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Re: In Search Of The Vision
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 06:38:32 PM AEST
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| very nice poetry ....shows ur talent in this field.keep it up!. --------Nida. |
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Re: In Search Of The Vision
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by Saira on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 02:43:37 PM AEST
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Thank you very much Jenni for reading and expressing your views on my poem :-)
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Re: In Search Of The Vision
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by Saira on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 02:43:59 PM AEST
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Thank you very much Jenni for reading and expressing your views on my poem :-)
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Re: In Search Of The Vision
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by frozensuicide on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 07:35:42 PM AEST
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| this is really beautiful. i love it. i love the rhymes and everything. |
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Re: In Search Of The Vision
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by Jarmen_Kell on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 07:32:14 AM AEST
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| Keep searching. I stuck to my guns and I won the battle, young one. Believe. |
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Re: In Search Of The Vision
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 12:05:33 AM AEST
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Never give up your call, dear one. He answers all prayers. Sometimes, though the answer is No, because he loves you so. He watches over you and doesn't want any harm to come to you, so if the answer is not heard, remember he heard your every Word!
Beautiful, heart feeling poetry. I look forward to more. Please continue writing, and welcome to the best place in the universe for poets.
lovingcritters
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Re: In Search Of The Vision
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by Saira on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 11:12:31 AM AEST
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You are so right. Thank you very much for the kind and encouragement words lovingcritters. I really appreciate it.
This is the most beautiful comment I ever received :o)
Saira |
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Re: In Search Of The Vision
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 05:26:59 AM AEST
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| Great job describing that fear of not being heard, I loved the way you constructed this poem. It is both creative and meaningful, and an emotion that everyone deals with at one point in time or another, loneliness. A+ |
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Re: In Search Of The Vision
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 05:31:54 AM AEST
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| Sorry to post twice, but I just wanted to add, that maybe even though you don't realize it, he does answer you. Maybe he tells you things all the time, in your own heart, and you just fail to recognize that it is him there talking to you, through your own thoughts, feelings, and actions. Bless you on your quest. |
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