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Array ( [sid] => 17689 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => LOST & USED LOVE [time] => 2003-05-17 03:35:00 [hometext] => MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT POETRY WRITING [bodytext] => Once you were my sunshine
now just a dark part of my past
the memories we made were
just part of the charade
it wasn't love it wasn't lust
what you offered just wasn't enough
i always cared was always there
but your heart wasn't devoted to me
the tears the pain heartache is
all i have gained
the way i loved you will never be the same
when all is said and done i
realise i was nothing to you but some sexual fun you had a taste you held me for so long
yet your face from my heart i can't erase
even though in your heart i never had a special place or a chance to win the race
and in your heart be first place........... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 22 [informant] => HotSizzlinGal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

LOST & USED LOVE

Contributed by HotSizzlinGal on Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Once you were my sunshine
now just a dark part of my past
the memories we made were
just part of the charade
it wasn't love it wasn't lust
what you offered just wasn't enough
i always cared was always there
but your heart wasn't devoted to me
the tears the pain heartache is
all i have gained
the way i loved you will never be the same
when all is said and done i
realise i was nothing to you but some sexual fun you had a taste you held me for so long
yet your face from my heart i can't erase
even though in your heart i never had a special place or a chance to win the race
and in your heart be first place...........

Copyright © HotSizzlinGal ... [ 2003-05-17 03:35:00]
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Re: LOST & USED LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 12:36:51 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC HotSizzlinGal.... This is really nice... I enjoyed reading it. Hope to see more of your poems posted here..
Jenni

Re: LOST & USED LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by LIVINGLIFE on Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 12:47:52 AM AEST
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sounds like u were hurt sad thing who ever it was should of knew that they had someone that loved them sorry if i am wrong thats what i got out of it keep writing

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