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Array ( [sid] => 176478 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Rape [time] => 2013-07-08 14:14:53 [hometext] => The poetry tries to portray the harrowing suffering a woman goes through when her body and soul is violated [bodytext] => Therein she lies, in a pool of blood.
Her vulnerabilities stark, and exposed;
the world brought down with a thud.
The womanhood now brutally disclosed.
In the throes of pain, she cries and
shouts for help. Therein she lies.

Now, her bare body doesn't invite the disgusting gaze.
Pedestrians just walk past her, and her nakedness.

Many rapists, in Griffin avatars, they in their own phase.
The Lions have predated, and are a goner.
The ashes from the fire, still, causing a stir;
the scavengers cant be far behind, and they come,
the eagles dive from a height, and enter her;
therein she lies, without any throb of the heart.
now a corpse, dead and scavenged.
therein she lies,the denuded dead body.
woman, the weaker sex is murdered, and;
everyday, weakened, by nature's perfidy.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 96 [topic] => 75 [informant] => taranum [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

The Rape

Contributed by taranum on Monday, 8th July 2013 @ 02:14:53 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Therein she lies, in a pool of blood.
Her vulnerabilities stark, and exposed;
the world brought down with a thud.
The womanhood now brutally disclosed.
In the throes of pain, she cries and
shouts for help. Therein she lies.

Now, her bare body doesn't invite the disgusting gaze.
Pedestrians just walk past her, and her nakedness.

Many rapists, in Griffin avatars, they in their own phase.
The Lions have predated, and are a goner.
The ashes from the fire, still, causing a stir;
the scavengers cant be far behind, and they come,
the eagles dive from a height, and enter her;
therein she lies, without any throb of the heart.
now a corpse, dead and scavenged.
therein she lies,the denuded dead body.
woman, the weaker sex is murdered, and;
everyday, weakened, by nature's perfidy.

Copyright © taranum ... [ 2013-07-08 14:14:53]
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Re: The Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 9th July 2013 @ 12:17:44 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
This is a heart wrenching write but I'm sure it needs to be said.
I hope this is just you trying to know how it felt.
keep writing.
Awesome work.
Big blessings,
emy

Re: The Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Tuesday, 9th July 2013 @ 02:26:54 AM AEST
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This reminds me of the film based on a true story where a women was raped in a bar by several men on a pinball machine and no one attempted to help her. This sort of thing happens cause we allow it to happen. The minute society gets up of it lazy rear end and does something about it, it will stop. God created woman to be loved and protected and no other reason. The man that violates this will answer to God one day. Great Write. Sad but true and the world needs to know.

Greetings
Rus

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