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Rose of the valley
His most precious child
Beauty and grace
Personality mild

Gone but not forgotten
He misses your face
Lost without hope
Are you in God’s grace?

Why did you leave him?
Every day he wonders anew
Could he have changed things
What was there to do?

You left to save the others
Your life not lost in vain
You wish there was some way
To relieve his pain

He wandered the valley
Despair his only friend
Until he found that
A message you did send

Deep in the valleys depth
He found you left behind
A rose of the whitest white
And around the bush a light did shine

For love never really dies
It only grows day by day
Even when apart
Hearts will find a way

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Rose of the Valleu

Contributed by NoSaint on Thursday, 23rd May 2013 @ 12:38:37 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Rose of the Valley

Rose of the valley
His most precious child
Beauty and grace
Personality mild

Gone but not forgotten
He misses your face
Lost without hope
Are you in God’s grace?

Why did you leave him?
Every day he wonders anew
Could he have changed things
What was there to do?

You left to save the others
Your life not lost in vain
You wish there was some way
To relieve his pain

He wandered the valley
Despair his only friend
Until he found that
A message you did send

Deep in the valleys depth
He found you left behind
A rose of the whitest white
And around the bush a light did shine

For love never really dies
It only grows day by day
Even when apart
Hearts will find a way

Copyright Â© NoSaint ... [ 2013-05-23 00:38:37]
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Re: Rose of the Valleu (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 23rd May 2013 @ 08:51:50 AM AEST
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Dear Shari,
Just like long ago..............your words are lovely, lovingly told!
A poet such as you dear, should never stop writing poetry so clear.
I'll remember this one forever...........for forever
you will remain one of my most favorite poets, encircled with fame!
Warm love
LovingCritters
consue

Re: Rose of the Valleu (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 26th May 2013 @ 10:29:47 AM AEST
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Well, It's a treet to have you back and posting beautiful work.
So sorry for your loss.
Huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: Rose of the Valleu (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 28th April 2014 @ 09:41:37 PM AEST
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heartbreakingly beautiful; made me shed tears,

hugs n' love nessa

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