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Array ( [sid] => 17572 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I USED TO DREAM [time] => 2003-05-14 22:05:00 [hometext] => enjoy ! [bodytext] => I used to dream of a place by the lake
where the music and moonlight keep me awake
where my way is drawn by a shooting star
making wishes doesn't sound so far

I used to dream of an island ,an exotic land
where i can hide my fear under the sand
where the sound of the waves is inviting me
to sing,dance..just feel free

Then i met you and stopped to have this dream
as it became true with your love supreme
I believed i found in you this place
in your gentle touch and warm embrace
I believed when i saw in your eyes that light
you're my land, my star, my breath,my sight

Until you showed me it wasn't true
So i lost my dream,and i lost you [comments] => 6 [counter] => 328 [topic] => 14 [informant] => GINA [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

I USED TO DREAM

Contributed by GINA on Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

I used to dream of a place by the lake
where the music and moonlight keep me awake
where my way is drawn by a shooting star
making wishes doesn't sound so far

I used to dream of an island ,an exotic land
where i can hide my fear under the sand
where the sound of the waves is inviting me
to sing,dance..just feel free

Then i met you and stopped to have this dream
as it became true with your love supreme
I believed i found in you this place
in your gentle touch and warm embrace
I believed when i saw in your eyes that light
you're my land, my star, my breath,my sight

Until you showed me it wasn't true
So i lost my dream,and i lost you

Copyright © GINA ... [ 2003-05-14 22:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I USED TO DREAM (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 10:43:19 PM AEST
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sad but very well written and beautiful
Shari

Re: I USED TO DREAM (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 12:15:03 AM AEST
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AAHH I did enjoy this sad write!
You can still dream! Christina

Re: I USED TO DREAM (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 06:50:47 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this. If you can find it once - you can find it again.

sleepless_siren

Re: I USED TO DREAM (User Rating: 1 )
by Jennifer_Deanne_Driscoll on Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 03:59:59 AM AEST
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So saaad. Great write.

Re: I USED TO DREAM (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 12:40:10 PM AEST
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See what happens when go meeting people behind my back :P
Kidding, a7san ma yfakkir 7adan shi:P
Nice poem, very well written ;)

Re: I USED TO DREAM (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 12:50:21 PM AEST
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Never stop dreaming. Whatever happens, never stop dreaming. When you give up on them, they give up on you.
Wishing for better days,
David

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