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Array ( [sid] => 175603 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => stone in my hand [time] => 2013-03-29 23:21:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => in my hand I hold
a precious stone
it twists and turns

it remains I n my grip
ive got a strong hold

energetic
radiant
lethargic
insignificant
demonic
human like
persona
euphoric

n n n n n n n
and I
and I
like it here
in this flesh atomic
superficial
personification,

chameleons
cha me lions
cha me lion s

skin cloak
deeper deeper
inside I hide

flesh bones and blood
my shelter
and my hand is twitching
my palms are itching
and my precious stone
keeps me safe
inside
my flesh
im home [comments] => 4 [counter] => 291 [topic] => 49 [informant] => alicewhite [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )

stone in my hand

Contributed by alicewhite on Friday, 29th March 2013 @ 11:21:28 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

in my hand I hold
a precious stone
it twists and turns

it remains I n my grip
ive got a strong hold

energetic
radiant
lethargic
insignificant
demonic
human like
persona
euphoric

n n n n n n n
and I
and I
like it here
in this flesh atomic
superficial
personification,

chameleons
cha me lions
cha me lion s

skin cloak
deeper deeper
inside I hide

flesh bones and blood
my shelter
and my hand is twitching
my palms are itching
and my precious stone
keeps me safe
inside
my flesh
im home

Copyright © alicewhite ... [ 2013-03-29 23:21:28]
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Re: stone in my hand (User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on Saturday, 30th March 2013 @ 07:24:57 AM AEST
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I love the imagery and feel of this awesome poem!
-L.

Re: stone in my hand (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th March 2013 @ 08:57:59 PM AEST
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Interesting. Even being near someone you might never come into their place. A tone that is you might sit and never speak. It makes me think of the mind and of dreams and of the chemically induced pathways that might produce self identity from stories one secretly collects. And then, the separation between the mind and body and the single solitary soul that inhabits everyone. I suppose the answer is bliss. To free your soul is bliss they say. only then the single solitary soul transcends everything. I believe what you say is true.
You do think as you write... I love that!
Peace!

Re: stone in my hand (User Rating: 1 )
by bigj on Wednesday, 3rd April 2013 @ 03:06:22 AM AEST
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Extremely fun to read

Re: stone in my hand (User Rating: 1 )
by MickyTwo1984 on Saturday, 10th August 2013 @ 10:46:19 AM AEST
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Brilliant. :)

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