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I climb the gate
Contributed by
katieliz
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Tuesday, 5th March 2013 @ 07:52:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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when i climb over the gate my whole world changes to a happier state the air is fresh the breeze on my face as i walk through the green grass what better place its the start of summer the sky is blue the golden sun casts a gentle hue as i walk on upwards i hear a nicker from the corner of my eye i see a gentle flicker of sardis tail hes spotted me, i know what hes thinking its time for tea then all five heads pop up from grazing they gallop towards me all guns blazing and after they have all been fed their heads go down its time for bed, but not until the jobs are complete, can i sit down in my rocking seat, and here comes tom tom a handsome cat jumps up on my lap hes quite fat as he lies down and i stroke his fur his eyes close gently with a purr i lock the door its time to go i remember the winter and all the snow the mud and the puddles the big bales of hay theres plenty of grass, now, its may. my job is done its getting late i walk away and climb the gate.
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Re: I climb the gate
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sagefairy on
Tuesday, 5th March 2013 @ 11:52:52 PM AEST (User
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| Oh I love this. To be nearer to nature than I am at the moment... That is heaven! Nice work! I could picture it all! Blessings, SF |
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Re: I climb the gate
(User Rating: 1 ) by newbie5464 on
Sunday, 10th March 2013 @ 07:07:46 AM AEST (User
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Wow! Really well written, and easy to relate to. Great Job :)
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