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Array ( [sid] => 17533 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Tick tock ...tick tock... [time] => 2003-05-14 03:35:00 [hometext] => whatever happens you have to learn to pick up your feet and keep on going ...because time stops for no one. [bodytext] => stuck in the middle
of a broken relationship
one that doesnt belong
space had brought them together
and time will rip them apart
the clock will tick tock, tick tock

Reminiscing about the past
Reliving what they had
slowly spacing apart
crying over nothing
dying for a break
the clock will tick tock, tick tock

No matter what
Fate will reign

Although so vein
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Tick tock ...tick tock...

Contributed by Jilli_bean on Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

stuck in the middle
of a broken relationship
one that doesnt belong
space had brought them together
and time will rip them apart
the clock will tick tock, tick tock

Reminiscing about the past
Reliving what they had
slowly spacing apart
crying over nothing
dying for a break
the clock will tick tock, tick tock

No matter what
Fate will reign

Although so vein
the clock will tick tock, tick tock

Copyright © Jilli_bean ... [ 2003-05-14 03:35:00]
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Re: Tick tock ...tick tock... (User Rating: 1 )
by eric on Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 05:52:03 AM AEST
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good idea, but vein/vain? well done

Re: Tick tock ...tick tock... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 05:28:14 PM AEST
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yes, time stops for no one.. this was great makes one think:)

Re: Tick tock ...tick tock... (User Rating: 1 )
by stargazer on Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 06:55:29 PM AEST
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You knew from the moment I read this... that I became the biggest fan of this poem. I am ALWAYS the one telling people that time stops for no one... and you may stop but time will just move on around you- so what is the use in stopping?

This was short but the point. It was not over done. You got to your point and it was amazing, never the less. I am your BIGGEST fan of this poem. I love it and will always remember it...

"The clock with tick tock, tick tock"--- doesn't get any realer than that.

Amy

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