Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 02-June 21:48:09 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 175282 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bye baby [time] => 2013-02-27 13:50:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I know we just met
So I don’t know your name yet
But I feel we could have a talk
Or maybe a little walk
‘Cause this smile on your face
Put a little light on my dark place
I was talking about my heart
The broken one
The one
That had been hurt
That’s exactly what I said the first time we met
And after that

I always protected you like a president giving away a speech
I never got mad at you, even the days you were yelling at me like a *****
Remember back in 2009, when you got depressives thoughts
I was the only one who stayed around to keep you away from these stupid thoughts
Even the night your boyfriend dumped you
I was the only one who stayed around to build up your confidence
Talked to you
And gave you another chance

Nah that night I didn’t take advantage of the situation because I loved you
What mattered for me was your happiness, not necessarily be with you
You knew me better than anyone but still you chose to listen to your friends but not me
I knew you better than you knew yourself but still you chose to be with someone else but not me
And now your last word to me was a simple wow
I should admit that was amazing that was so wow

You and I had all to be happy
But your pride won’t let you admit it, it’s crazy
Now you’re gone and all I have left is this pen
I hope you’re happy
Life gave me one billion reasons to be happy
But I was only concerned about one, you and your happiness
I should have asked Mr. Monk what happened to his life
After the death of his wife
I know it is just a movie
But still
I can always go back to the reality
And ask about Miss Whitney
She got all to be happy
The music, the fame, the money
But all she wanted was Mr. Bobby
Who did she end up? It was tragic

I know I said this before
But let me repeat in case you didn’t hear me first
Even though you hurt me, I don’t hate you
Because if I do
I won’t have anyone else to like
Remember the days I told you, you be fine?
Now you growing up
And messing up a lot
And somehow
You’ll have to clean them up
I don’t know if I be around to help
But if I'm not
Just remember this
One day you be fine
I can see it through your eyes
You're my friend
And I will never let you down

Bye Baby [comments] => 1 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 52 [informant] => birdyFogh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Bye baby

Contributed by birdyFogh on Wednesday, 27th February 2013 @ 01:50:39 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



I know we just met
So I don’t know your name yet
But I feel we could have a talk
Or maybe a little walk
‘Cause this smile on your face
Put a little light on my dark place
I was talking about my heart
The broken one
The one
That had been hurt
That’s exactly what I said the first time we met
And after that

I always protected you like a president giving away a speech
I never got mad at you, even the days you were yelling at me like a *****
Remember back in 2009, when you got depressives thoughts
I was the only one who stayed around to keep you away from these stupid thoughts
Even the night your boyfriend dumped you
I was the only one who stayed around to build up your confidence
Talked to you
And gave you another chance

Nah that night I didn’t take advantage of the situation because I loved you
What mattered for me was your happiness, not necessarily be with you
You knew me better than anyone but still you chose to listen to your friends but not me
I knew you better than you knew yourself but still you chose to be with someone else but not me
And now your last word to me was a simple wow
I should admit that was amazing that was so wow

You and I had all to be happy
But your pride won’t let you admit it, it’s crazy
Now you’re gone and all I have left is this pen
I hope you’re happy
Life gave me one billion reasons to be happy
But I was only concerned about one, you and your happiness
I should have asked Mr. Monk what happened to his life
After the death of his wife
I know it is just a movie
But still
I can always go back to the reality
And ask about Miss Whitney
She got all to be happy
The music, the fame, the money
But all she wanted was Mr. Bobby
Who did she end up? It was tragic

I know I said this before
But let me repeat in case you didn’t hear me first
Even though you hurt me, I don’t hate you
Because if I do
I won’t have anyone else to like
Remember the days I told you, you be fine?
Now you growing up
And messing up a lot
And somehow
You’ll have to clean them up
I don’t know if I be around to help
But if I'm not
Just remember this
One day you be fine
I can see it through your eyes
You're my friend
And I will never let you down

Bye Baby




Copyright © birdyFogh ... [ 2013-02-27 13:50:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Bye baby (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Wednesday, 27th February 2013 @ 05:11:35 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
awesome work
thanks for sharing
thehotshotpoet




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com