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But I am a witness
I sit and listen
To girl who's been claimed as the victim
As she spills out her depression
Over her greatest obsession
The the influence that kept her alive
It kept her from feeling deprived
She did it to keep that smile on her face
And leave the real pain sitting in that hiding place
But what I really knew
Was something she thought kept me as her fool
She only did her wrong doings to take her mind off life
Leaving only memories between her and the switchblade knife
Everyday she pretended to act like something she was not
Thinking there was no way ever that she would be caught
And when she took in each sip or inhaled every last bit
Her overpowering depression seemed to just quit
As if it never had existed
And the love within was the only thing that persisted
In the end she was only fooling herself
What she was committing was like an act of killing one's self
She was becoming something she was not
And you knew she did it because she was feeling distraught
She consumed herself with alcohol and pot
To re-add her False Love to the forever weak spot.
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False Love

Contributed by MogulPoet on Tuesday, 26th February 2013 @ 11:13:38 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

I've got no experience
But I am a witness
I sit and listen
To girl who's been claimed as the victim
As she spills out her depression
Over her greatest obsession
The the influence that kept her alive
It kept her from feeling deprived
She did it to keep that smile on her face
And leave the real pain sitting in that hiding place
But what I really knew
Was something she thought kept me as her fool
She only did her wrong doings to take her mind off life
Leaving only memories between her and the switchblade knife
Everyday she pretended to act like something she was not
Thinking there was no way ever that she would be caught
And when she took in each sip or inhaled every last bit
Her overpowering depression seemed to just quit
As if it never had existed
And the love within was the only thing that persisted
In the end she was only fooling herself
What she was committing was like an act of killing one's self
She was becoming something she was not
And you knew she did it because she was feeling distraught
She consumed herself with alcohol and pot
To re-add her False Love to the forever weak spot.

Copyright © MogulPoet ... [ 2013-02-26 23:13:38]
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