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Array ( [sid] => 175106 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Porcelain Lover [time] => 2013-02-12 21:15:42 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Its been a while since I could write a sappy love song
I guess my inspiration got bored and walked out on me along with her
But is it common that when a Poet's heart breaks, it all comes out wrong?
I mean because the style and syllables and timing of the lines
are all lost on me like my hand just took its own life.

Did I inherit some double helix DNA strand from mom and dad
that enables me to be a lover but still like every other man?
Or maybe its simple than that
More like when Jphn legend sang "The best you've ever Had"
where she doesn't mean to brag when she says
Im the best you'll ever have

I do believe That I'll come out of this whole though
and flow into the coherent strings of nouns and verbs
and rythming words
that leave me with a hit because I just bared my soul
and the crowd will cheer like they did
when I used to be whole
Even if it is just a facade
It'll be a beautiful facade
like autumn leaves of a thousand colors
as fragile as porcelain lovers
Because now that I think about it
It won't take much to leave me without air
gasping for breath
grasping for where
...
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Porcelain Lover

Contributed by skraps414 on Tuesday, 12th February 2013 @ 09:15:42 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Its been a while since I could write a sappy love song
I guess my inspiration got bored and walked out on me along with her
But is it common that when a Poet's heart breaks, it all comes out wrong?
I mean because the style and syllables and timing of the lines
are all lost on me like my hand just took its own life.

Did I inherit some double helix DNA strand from mom and dad
that enables me to be a lover but still like every other man?
Or maybe its simple than that
More like when Jphn legend sang "The best you've ever Had"
where she doesn't mean to brag when she says
Im the best you'll ever have

I do believe That I'll come out of this whole though
and flow into the coherent strings of nouns and verbs
and rythming words
that leave me with a hit because I just bared my soul
and the crowd will cheer like they did
when I used to be whole
Even if it is just a facade
It'll be a beautiful facade
like autumn leaves of a thousand colors
as fragile as porcelain lovers
Because now that I think about it
It won't take much to leave me without air
gasping for breath
grasping for where
...
you won't be

Copyright © skraps414 ... [ 2013-02-12 21:15:42]
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Re: Porcelain Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by NimuehB on Wednesday, 13th February 2013 @ 04:47:21 AM AEST
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I like the conversational tone, it's very personable. I could associate very well with this. It's great!

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