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SNAKES
Contributed by
colinb
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Saturday, 9th February 2013 @ 01:54:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Our days are nolonger grey
The sun is warming up the days
So the snakes come out to play
To warm up through the day
WOW!! their are lots of snakes today
I almost step on the snake in my way
He is mad now & wants me to pay
So he strikes at me while im in his way
He strikes me with all his might
Strikes me really tight
His head pinned to my thigh
So i grab his throat really tight
I pull with all my might
To remove him from my thigh
So i throw him far into the sky
Back into the bush where he will survive
So snakes don't strike me today
Because this red head dosen't want to play
Colin Bradley
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colinb
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2013-02-09 13:54:38]
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Re: SNAKES
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by Dispersion on
Sunday, 10th February 2013 @ 01:56:53 AM AEST
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| I think this is really great poem with some very interesting imagery of you wrangling a snake. I would in the future spend a little more time checking your grammar, spelling and punctuation before submitting. This will assure your readers get the most out your poem. |
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Re: SNAKES
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 28th July 2014 @ 10:47:52 PM AEST
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lol! great nature poem! i had one in the yard a few weeks
ago, we watched each other a while then he left,
hugs n' love nessa |
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