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Array ( [sid] => 17501 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2003-05-13 11:35:00 [hometext] => another love/suicide scrawl [bodytext] => in our room with all your things
the things you left behind
prisoner in this house, no longer a home
going out of my mind

pictures of you adorn the walls
a poor replacement for your smile
even though i know it's stupid
i talk to them once in awhile

all your art, your poems, your knick-knacks
painful mementos of your life
and when i'm at my lowest
i stare at your knife and cry

i should have figured it out
when you started cutting again
but i just passed it off as a phase
you must have felt so alone in the end

but now i'm the lonely one
left with Nothing but the past
and as many pills as they've got me on
i fear the memories won't last

at night i think, i cannot sleep
it eats me up inside
how flippantly i dismissed
the notion of your suicide

i assumed you were ok
i ignored all of the signs
just carried on, and now you're gone
HOW COULD I HAVE BEEN SO ***** BLIND

i hate you because you were so selfish
killing yourself and leaving me
i envy you, for i am shackled to the past
and you, my love, are free
i miss you more than these tears can show
i can't sleep alone in this bed
and no matter how much i drink at night
i still can't get you out of my head

i really miss you sweetie
and i hope you miss me too
please don't think me weak
but, this is all that i can do
so when i pull this trigger
i pray that you're the next thing that i see
so we can be together forever
the way it was meant to be [comments] => 4 [counter] => 260 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Untitled

Contributed by Cancer on Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



in our room with all your things
the things you left behind
prisoner in this house, no longer a home
going out of my mind

pictures of you adorn the walls
a poor replacement for your smile
even though i know it's stupid
i talk to them once in awhile

all your art, your poems, your knick-knacks
painful mementos of your life
and when i'm at my lowest
i stare at your knife and cry

i should have figured it out
when you started cutting again
but i just passed it off as a phase
you must have felt so alone in the end

but now i'm the lonely one
left with Nothing but the past
and as many pills as they've got me on
i fear the memories won't last

at night i think, i cannot sleep
it eats me up inside
how flippantly i dismissed
the notion of your suicide

i assumed you were ok
i ignored all of the signs
just carried on, and now you're gone
HOW COULD I HAVE BEEN SO ***** BLIND

i hate you because you were so selfish
killing yourself and leaving me
i envy you, for i am shackled to the past
and you, my love, are free
i miss you more than these tears can show
i can't sleep alone in this bed
and no matter how much i drink at night
i still can't get you out of my head

i really miss you sweetie
and i hope you miss me too
please don't think me weak
but, this is all that i can do
so when i pull this trigger
i pray that you're the next thing that i see
so we can be together forever
the way it was meant to be




Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2003-05-13 11:35:00]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 01:56:15 PM AEST
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Oh wow... that's so sad but so incredibly touching. Amazing, emotional write. Blessed be,

~ Moonlit Angel


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 05:32:04 PM AEST
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this is so sad...


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 04:54:03 AM AEST
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Awesome write


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 03:08:26 PM AEST
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Wow... so good yet so sad... this leaves me speechless... so powerful

Bobo (Joel)




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