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so pure so fine
trying to hold on
wanting you to be mine

Already I have a love
they're heart is very true
I love them so deeply
but now there are two

Can this really happen
can you love more than one
where am I to go
what have I unintentionally done

Not wanting to hurt either
not knowing what to do
feelings and emotions
this is all so very new

Hearts are going to get broken
nothing can stop the pain
what am I to do
I feel so very ashamed

Two hearts I hold in my hand
not knowing what to do
I wish that someone could tell me
for I do not have a clue
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What Do I Do?

Contributed by PS_iloveyou on Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 09:48:07 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

A love so deep
so pure so fine
trying to hold on
wanting you to be mine

Already I have a love
they're heart is very true
I love them so deeply
but now there are two

Can this really happen
can you love more than one
where am I to go
what have I unintentionally done

Not wanting to hurt either
not knowing what to do
feelings and emotions
this is all so very new

Hearts are going to get broken
nothing can stop the pain
what am I to do
I feel so very ashamed

Two hearts I hold in my hand
not knowing what to do
I wish that someone could tell me
for I do not have a clue

Copyright © PS_iloveyou ... [ 2002-08-04 21:48:07]
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Re: What Do I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 10:09:23 PM AEST
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Jus listen 2 your heart.
Tis better 2 have luved
and lost, 2 have never
luved at all!!!!!!!

Re: What Do I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 10:27:51 PM AEST
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I know how you fell and i know not the exact answer all i can tell you is to go with your heart in what ever decission you make i have two i love but one is kind of spoken for though he is not married he is engaged but with a love so true as the love he says he has for me, he says he wants to be with me but if thats the case why does he remain with her... hmmm sounds like another poem i need to write.... but like emy says go with your heart.... great write

Re: What Do I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzy on Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 01:10:46 AM AEST
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I found myself in this predicament before as well..actually am in one right now...one of them is in a way spoken for but he says that it has been over for a long time just can't seem to give her up because of feeling guilty (they have children together but are not married)...and the other is still young he is only 20 and I am not quite sure that he really knows what "love" is although what he feels has to be the closest thing to it..I love them both so very much and feel ashamed that I have let this happen and guilty that one of them is going to get hurt in the end who knows I may be the one who loses out...great write...
Lasca

Follow your heart as emy says because it will always guide you in the right direction

oh yea sorry the comments so long lol

Re: What Do I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by chatabox on Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 05:33:38 AM AEST
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tricky indeed, but do you feel yourself thinking about oneof them more.....when you go out with one of them do you wish you were with the other? or do you feel this way about bothof them? goodluck

Re: What Do I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by Cypher on Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 03:23:42 PM AEST
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I understand how you feel... but you should try to think of the future in this matter. which one of them is it easier to picture yourself with a year from now, 5 years from now... who do you think you will be happier with? which one of them are you more comfortable with and why? look deep into yourself and ask yourself... what do I love about each of them? Question everything. It might help you figure out which one of them is the one for you.

Re: What Do I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by Shayle on Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 01:17:28 PM AEST
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A great poem...I think that all of us at one point in time have held two hearts in our hands. Choose wisely!:) ~Shayle~

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