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Array ( [sid] => 174942 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All I can do is admire you [time] => 2013-01-28 22:07:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Ugh, why can't I just be honest with you?
I want you, need you, love you,
Adore you and most of all, hide from you.
I look your way when your not looking
I smile at you for more reasons than you
smile at me, with that little curve on your lip.
Why can't that be mine?
Nothing hurts me more than your strong voice
and your hollow eyes that taunt my hollow heart endlessly.
It's selfish I know, to want something as good as you.
But the love refuses to flee
and always comes back stronger.
but not to me, to you.
my love wants to stay with you
while glaring at me, mocking me,
"Can't you follow me? I'm not able to wait forever, you know."
But what hurts more is, "He wont either."
Ugh, why can't I just be honest with you?
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All I can do is admire you

Contributed by onesokay on Monday, 28th January 2013 @ 10:07:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Ugh, why can't I just be honest with you?
I want you, need you, love you,
Adore you and most of all, hide from you.
I look your way when your not looking
I smile at you for more reasons than you
smile at me, with that little curve on your lip.
Why can't that be mine?
Nothing hurts me more than your strong voice
and your hollow eyes that taunt my hollow heart endlessly.
It's selfish I know, to want something as good as you.
But the love refuses to flee
and always comes back stronger.
but not to me, to you.
my love wants to stay with you
while glaring at me, mocking me,
"Can't you follow me? I'm not able to wait forever, you know."
But what hurts more is, "He wont either."
Ugh, why can't I just be honest with you?

Copyright © onesokay ... [ 2013-01-28 22:07:28]
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Re: All I can do is admire you (User Rating: 1 )
by Whiskurz on Tuesday, 29th January 2013 @ 01:25:40 PM AEST
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Sometimes love is a waiting game....I hope your wait is short....Good write my friend.....Whisk

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