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[aid] => mick
[title] => Echo0o
[time] => 2013-01-27 17:59:33
[hometext] => to anyone that reads this i would love some criticism leave a comment tell me what you think instead of just reading it.. performing this one soon revised it.. spoken word poetry, thankyou=]
[bodytext] => The Netherness It's A Place Of Stress When Im Alone And Regressed Where Happyness Becomes A Taste To Posess But Bitterness Be My Guest Neglects Me To Take Steps To My Purpose Got Me Searchin... Searching Mapquest For The Right Left Cause I Left Right The Moment I Put The Right Left To My Dad's Chest My Right's Left Lurking... Lurking For The Bill Like Maybe Ill Find It In This Bottle Of Tequil I Swallow My Bottled Emotions Hollow Hold Still... Into The Netherness Where Gravity Holds No Will To My Mind So My Eyes Freefall To Her Hips... I do lize As I Wander Through Her Thigh's In Search Of A Tip I Gather These Dimes Until They Start To Make Sense(Cents) Of My Senselessness Doven Into Her Innocence These Oceans Hide Where Her True Value Exists So I Float... In The Netherness I Need Rope Like The Hangman Needs Hope Just To Choke Out An Answer Already Known Like I Know I Gave Up When Dad Left Home Treated School Like A Prepaid Phone Acted A Fool While My Mom's Left Alone Sadness My Throne Led To A Rebel Gone Rogue My Throne Overthrown To The Netherness I was Thrown... But Even Then I Rise Over Horizons Race On My Eyes And Chase Victory Down Its Baseline And We Tie But I Win As The Runner, Stay Running My Mouth And My Echoes Hold Sound So My Meanings Bring Clout Meaning You WILL Feel My Words If You Raise Doubt... I Raise My Sword Sharpen It With My Poise It Hits When I Voice On Your Throat And You Choke And I Dig Get My POINT Lord Do You Hear My Voice? In The Netherness [comments] => 0 [counter] => 132 [topic] => 61 [informant] => jdioo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
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