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[sid] => 17459
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => Take a Breather and Let Me Be Me
[time] => 2003-05-12 14:35:00
[hometext] => I wrote this to my friend who always shows concern for every little thing I do... Enjoy!!!!
[bodytext] => You say I have problems like I need to go get help
You say my drinking is a problem the mistakes to my life You say it’s the alcohol that holds me down like a bundle of kelp You say I can’t see things straight that's why I turn to the knife Its clear you don't know me as well as you thought you did It’s easy to sit back and make fake analysts of someone I can’t believe that you think my problems started from when I was a kid You actually think that my problems need to be let out in the sun How I wish you could hear how ridiculous you sound I could quit any one of my so-called “Problems” at any time If you would just quit trying to kick me to the ground I am okay and for your troubles I will even give you a dime Don’t fret over me, I am a big girl and I know what I am getting myself into But don’t expect me to change because you show such concern It means nothing to me it just shows you can’t deal with what I do I have told you time and time again that I can deal with my own mess when will you learn Just walk away, out of my life if you can’t be happy with me I don’t need to be brought down by your sorrows But I can see that time has changed us and its time to let the past be I guess this is just how are story goes So I guess this is when we go our separate ways And say our finally good-byes and depart But no matter what happens I will remember our days And you will never leave my heat You were a good friend who just couldn’t take a chance and live [comments] => 1 [counter] => 285 [topic] => 43 [informant] => daydreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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