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it whispered
and it was odd
for me to hear
that strange voice
that felt so near;
told me to continue
in a narrow path
what I had always done
alone, on my own.
Walk a lonely walk…

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Shadow on a finite light

Contributed by rowenm on Tuesday, 18th December 2012 @ 08:55:06 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Walk a lonely walk
it whispered
and it was odd
for me to hear
that strange voice
that felt so near;
told me to continue
in a narrow path
what I had always done
alone, on my own.
Walk a lonely walk…

Like a shadow on a finite light.

Copyright Â© rowenm ... [ 2012-12-18 08:55:06]
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Re: Shadow on a finite light (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Tuesday, 18th December 2012 @ 09:26:30 AM AEST
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I recognise, understand and know these words, great poetry is about true connections.

Re: Shadow on a finite light (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Wednesday, 19th December 2012 @ 01:06:46 AM AEST
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Eloquently written - this is a great piece of poetry right here. One that I can relate to so well. You had me hung on every word.

Keep up the good work.

-Everette

Re: Shadow on a finite light (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 19th December 2012 @ 04:54:07 AM AEST
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I felt every word, beautiful.
Hugssss
and you are not alone...... we all need to hold eachother up, even at times we need to walk that path alone, know a tiny shadow follows you.YOu arent alone.

Michelle

Re: Shadow on a finite light (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Friday, 21st December 2012 @ 06:09:25 PM AEST
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we all walk the same path alone on our way home,,,beautiful words of wisdom you write in this poem,, love it

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