Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 03-June 00:05:13 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 173838 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wonderful World [time] => 2012-09-18 07:28:52 [hometext] => if it doesnt make since to you dont feel bad, it made no since to me either,kinda Rambeling on. [bodytext] => I awake every morning
& as I roll out of my bed
the most amazing thoughts
are Running threw my head

what a beautiful life I have
& what a wonderful life I live
it is my inspiration
to give all that I can give

allthough my life is full of pain
I look past what I can feel
I seem to find the beauty
most say it is unreal

I'm living in a dream world
where all is what you see
it might not be as real to you
but it truly is to me

what a beautiful world
where your dreams are all your own
enjoy them in privacy
or you can make them known

we choose what we remember
we control what we forget
some will one day understand
& some will learn Regret

the heart & mind work as one
creating what we dream
so we will have a story
that noone has ever seen

take the one's of laughter
they might be here a while
or choose the most meaningfull one's
the one's that made you smile

it is the only difference
this world can really see
it defines who we are
from who we thought we would be
the hot shot poet [comments] => 3 [counter] => 107 [topic] => 25 [informant] => thehotshotpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Wonderful World

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Tuesday, 18th September 2012 @ 07:28:52 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



I awake every morning
& as I roll out of my bed
the most amazing thoughts
are Running threw my head

what a beautiful life I have
& what a wonderful life I live
it is my inspiration
to give all that I can give

allthough my life is full of pain
I look past what I can feel
I seem to find the beauty
most say it is unreal

I'm living in a dream world
where all is what you see
it might not be as real to you
but it truly is to me

what a beautiful world
where your dreams are all your own
enjoy them in privacy
or you can make them known

we choose what we remember
we control what we forget
some will one day understand
& some will learn Regret

the heart & mind work as one
creating what we dream
so we will have a story
that noone has ever seen

take the one's of laughter
they might be here a while
or choose the most meaningfull one's
the one's that made you smile

it is the only difference
this world can really see
it defines who we are
from who we thought we would be
the hot shot poet




Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-09-18 07:28:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Wonderful World (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 18th September 2012 @ 10:23:37 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Makes sense to me.
Good work, friend.
Huggs, blessings,
emu


Re: Wonderful World (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Tuesday, 18th September 2012 @ 11:35:00 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This is a really nice poem and I can relate
Thanks for sharing


Re: Wonderful World (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Wednesday, 19th September 2012 @ 04:33:16 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This poem is awesome. How does it not make any sense? It makes all the sense in the world! It is exactly to the point about things in life, not only yours, but the human life in general. You too have a gift of insight, which there are many people in this world that don't have.

Wayne




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com