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Array ( [sid] => 173773 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Trust [time] => 2012-09-08 21:22:19 [hometext] => I wrote this poem a couple of weeks ago... I trusted someone and he took that trust. He then betrayed me and lost my trust. [bodytext] => You took my trust
I told you things not many people knew
You gave into your lust
And left me feeling blue

You knew we were just friends
And that’s all I ever wanted
Because of you it had to end
And now you left me haunted

I got drunk
You got your way
You’re a ***** punk
I’ll never forget that day

I’m forever scarred
And you’re to blame
You made my life hard
Now I walk around in shame

You don’t even realize
How bad you hurt me
Now you tell lies
And make me want to flee

I wished I could forget
And that you were still my best friend
But you weren’t legit
And I can no longer pretend

You broke my trust
Stole a piece of my life
Just to satisfy your lust
It cut me deep like a knife

I want to know why
You did that to me
I’m left to cry
Why couldn’t you just let it be?
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 61 [informant] => sbhottie288 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Trust

Contributed by sbhottie288 on Saturday, 8th September 2012 @ 09:22:19 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

You took my trust
I told you things not many people knew
You gave into your lust
And left me feeling blue

You knew we were just friends
And that’s all I ever wanted
Because of you it had to end
And now you left me haunted

I got drunk
You got your way
You’re a ***** punk
I’ll never forget that day

I’m forever scarred
And you’re to blame
You made my life hard
Now I walk around in shame

You don’t even realize
How bad you hurt me
Now you tell lies
And make me want to flee

I wished I could forget
And that you were still my best friend
But you weren’t legit
And I can no longer pretend

You broke my trust
Stole a piece of my life
Just to satisfy your lust
It cut me deep like a knife

I want to know why
You did that to me
I’m left to cry
Why couldn’t you just let it be?

Copyright Â© sbhottie288 ... [ 2012-09-08 21:22:19]
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Re: Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 8th September 2012 @ 11:06:35 PM AEST
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good to read and to know. I've been there, on both sides.
Confidences shouldn't have to be spelled out in advance, one should think. I also thought before I read this about a Trust, a blind Trust, or in a business or corporate way. Who hasn't done something dumb that shouldn't be repeated. I suppose it would be ok only years later and purely in jest and out in the open among friends. It's good to remember what you wrote.
Thanks for a good poem that reminds someone to think about what Trust should mean.

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